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lazzhar
10-07-2004, 08:09 PM
Hi, I'm still bearing to learn animation, so I modeled this guy and rigged him for animation then I'm starting animation using a sound clip I've got from a CD I like the voice so I toke it ;)
http://members.lycos.co.uk/lazzhar/playblast1.mov ( ~500 kb)
Please any tips to help.
-lazhar

lazzhar
10-08-2004, 12:25 PM
I added Lips Sync and tweaked a little bit then playblasted from a closer shot.
http://members.lycos.co.uk/lazzhar/playblast2.mov (400 kb)

Any advices would be apreciated :rolleyes:

ace4016
10-08-2004, 04:37 PM
I am pretty new to animation myself, only thing I can say is there isnt enough anticipation in his movements. Illustrated Principles of Animation (http://www.spicycricket.com/SCA/SCA_anim_principles.html) from spicycricket.com would help you out on this one i think.

lazzhar
10-08-2004, 07:31 PM
Thanks ace, that's really kind from you to answer me:wise:

To be honest I wanted to ad more anticipation but I didnt find where to put them cuz the animations is kinda fast and if I add those keyframes it will bost it and the character will look really running fast.
But thanks anyway, next time I should use less poses to leave some places to some anticipations.

For now I tweaked again the animation, and I added that camera shaking effect, but I feel it's overused nowdays? isnt?
http://members.lycos.co.uk/lazzhar/playblast4mov
Thanks

lazzhar
10-10-2004, 09:31 PM
the second part of the anima
http://members.lycos.co.uk/lazzhar/playblas6.mov

No offence no Maya users :rolleyes:

ace4016
10-10-2004, 09:45 PM
This is just my opinion on this, im not really good at animating, but I think some of the poses are a bit too still. If some of the poses would move just a little instead of just freeze in that position it might look a bit better.

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