Dark Elf Character

[the_podman]

the arms are way too long and also bring in the shoulders. Other than that, it looks great.

-pod:thumbsup:

[WileyFox]

I'll shorten up the arms as for the shoulders the reason they are out that much is because I want him to have the animal fur around his neck. So knowing that would u still say fix them

[the_podman]

ok, then. Bring in the arms from the biceps down. However, if you going for an exageratted ape like build, then it's fine. It's hard to tell. What concept is the character?

[WileyFox]

OK here is the concept I did not draw these I found them on the net

http://wileyfox.250free.com/armorweb.jpg

[shub]

I would also agree with the above comments. Right now the shoulders look wide. Abit more definition to describe the fur would be helpful. Plus I think the head(from just below the cheek bones and up) needs to be slimmer. The head looks a bit wide up top. IMO.

I like the details in the chest and around the knees. I would also think about bringing the clothes under the waist armour pieces abit. Right now it looks more like big hips than padded out shorts. But that might just be worked out with abit of texture to help show the different pieces of clothes/arms/body parts.

Nice work tho. Coming along very well.

[Maze]

What modeler did you use?

[WileyFox]

Do you mean software I used Maya. I'd like to go back and fix the stuff that was suggested with the model but I have to start texturing.

[WileyFox]

Class project gotta start the textures so I'll do my own personal versions with your suggestions, but please keep the tips coming

http://wileyfox.250free.com/WEBTEXT.jpg

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