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james_martin
08-14-2002, 04:34 AM
A pencil sketch i did, meant to be a close up of a flower
compression kinda sucks, but what do you think?

jeroentje
08-14-2002, 08:04 AM
Maybe make the frontshadow on the thing in the middle (cannot translate this) a bit darker so it stands out a bit more.
Nothing to crit for the rest. Looks very nice.

Norante
08-14-2002, 01:19 PM
I would try to insert some "depht of field", blurring the background a little bit.

Nice lighting, thought :thumbsup:

james_martin
08-14-2002, 05:16 PM
I added some shadows to the stamen(???) and some other areas, as for DOF theres isnt a background, so i dont know where you mean

james_martin
08-14-2002, 05:18 PM
update

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