Tamahome, Character Wip

[Self-Designer]

Hey, very nice work. There's only one critic, around the eyes, it just looks wierd as if the area is pulled outside/backward.

[SoD]

Good work. The arms look a little bit too short thought. Could you show some wires?

Keep it up

[kcvoodoo]

great start~! Just a couple things. The line of the nose looks like it gradually goes back bringing the forehead back as well. Normally if you look at a profile view of the head, the forehead and chin line up pretty good with the nose coming out a bit. Also the ears look a bit flattened and not defined enough. Keep up the good work~!

[FabioMSilva]

thanx for the repplies. Here are some wires(they are really big so i wont be posting the image itself) here´s the link: http://pwp.netcabo.pt/0257549601/cgtalk/job.jpg

I still gotta fix the head(already started moving the eyes forward).

Keep the C&C coming friends.

[WillieT]

he needs cheek bones and of course his forehead needs work,, but you already know that..
can't wait to see more

[FabioMSilva]

i took note of your Critics, and here´s some fixes i made on the head.
http://pwp.netcabo.pt/0257549601/cgtalk/head_upgrades.jpg

[Kifferding]

move the ear forward.
Is there a adams apple ( i hope i write it right)
and make it a bit <--> bigger on he sides like the <-->
Sry but i had a black out
and my english is bad :thumbsup:

[FabioMSilva]

ok, i´ve pushed the ear forward. :thumbsup: keep coming the good advices.

[Vertizor]

The lower half of the face seems too far from the upper half. Meaning: move the nose, mouth, chin up a little. The bridge of the nose just seems too long. If that's the look you're going for than I guess that works for you. Just my opinion.

[FabioMSilva]

good point. I have fixed that too.

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