Sabrina (nudity)

[zilla]

beautiful shading and I love the sketch of her hair (I'm sure you will paint over that though). Are you going to give her a background and some more detail? Maybe painting some visible light rays in the background would be nice? Great work!

[Mystifyurmind]

like the painterly style.

The face is well done. I'm curious though about her breasts. I don't mean to judge or sound dumb, but what are those on her nipples? They seem like if they are the beginnings, then they are out way too much...

but then again, I may be totally wrong since I wasn't there with the photo. Good work in the shading again, plase continue it.

[joelafrite]

Thank for comment... Im gonna work for new picture.

[joelafrite]

I do not know yet if I will put a background. For the moment the color is there only to emphasize the zones of light and shade. I think that I will work on the hair, I have already carry out a test. It is easy for me in Photoshop, but with Painter it is still difficult. For the breasts, it is not finished.:)

[joelafrite]

http://www.delta-zone.com/~fc4d/images/joelafrite_sabrina4.jpgHello a small update. I am not very satisfied with the hair. I also think that lighting is still with cooriger. Thank you for your comments and critical.

[Seraf]

Salut,
l'ombre du cou ne parait pas correct, le visage n'est pas assez eclairé
l'ombre sur l'épaule de droite n'a rien à faire là,
je sais pas si elle se trouve sur la photographie mais en tout cas
ca fait pas du tout logique là,
je check les mise à jour :)
bonne continuation

[Mystifyurmind]

I agree about the face, something is bothering me about the cheekbone even though it may just be the photo or view you had.

Does the right arm really have such a dark shadow?

[joelafrite]

I agree with you.
I wanted to accentuate the contrast and that made the shades incoherent.
I turn over to the job to correct all that.
I do not know if I have the right to post the photograph of domai?
Thank you for your comments

[joelafrite]

Hello guy, I resumed work on Sabrina. I changed the shades and the lights. I gave up the combat for the hair. I do not find the good adjustments of brush with Painter. I started again with Photoshop.

the picture :http://www.delta-zone.com/~fc4d/images/joelafrite_sabrina5.jpg

Thank for comments & critics

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