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Sytron
09-30-2004, 03:14 PM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/gallerycrits/7970/7970_1096557285_medium.jpg

Title: Still | The Window
Name: Keytoon Animation Studio
Country: Espana
Software: (Other), 3ds max

Hi again!!

Here I show an exercise of texturing for practice with my new wacom.
I worked in this scene about 5 hours, modeled, texturing|shading and lighting.

All comments are welcome :)

Jonatan | sytron

Frenkie
09-30-2004, 07:16 PM
Hi!

It's really realistic, and nice use of the textures, but not enogh. Its' just a window.

HapZungLam
09-30-2004, 09:12 PM
agree. its abit simple.

koroko
09-30-2004, 09:23 PM
Thats the poing guys, simplicity...
Maybe we have an issue here with complexity....i´ve never heard noone at cgtalk say " thats overly complex...."

just mi thoughts... :)


Thats what i like here, the simple subject with the mastered execution...


Killer work on the textures sytron...

ciao.

dmitriy_k
10-01-2004, 12:14 AM
Nice use of texture. It looks very realistic.

munkY
10-01-2004, 12:59 AM
The stones look very flat, can you post a wireframe?

Anyway, it looks very good, i like the fact that it is simple.

k4k
10-01-2004, 05:58 AM
CG?? :hmm:
g8 wrk!

Sytron
10-01-2004, 08:02 AM
Hi! thx for all the comments :)
Here two more renders and a wire, hope you like it. :D


Jonatan | sytron
www.sytrondesign.com (http://www.sytrondesign.com/)

http://www.keytoon.com/forums/thewindow02.jpg

http://www.keytoon.com/forums/thewindow03.jpg

http://www.keytoon.com/forums/thewindow04.jpg

STRAT
10-01-2004, 08:02 AM
i'm personally not a fan of texture work like this. doesn't mark the worth of a 3d artist imo. modelling and lighting are more important i think.

anyway, i think the scale is all messed up. the wood work, window size and window construction look absolutely minute and out of place compaired to the size of the rest of the environment.

and i think it doesn't sit in the wall right either. the lighting doesnt ancor it down enough, it's almost floating there.

sorry, not impressed :(

twdsgn
10-01-2004, 08:15 AM
:eek: WOW!:eek:
Insane detail on the wall! I thought that all was a texture! :thumbsup:
The Dof in the second render is amazing, it looks like a photo. What software did you use? Vray? ...Brazil?:shrug:

Nice job :applause:

nofxsapunk
10-01-2004, 08:17 AM
if you dont think that this isnt the work on a 3d artist then you are kind of mistaken man. sorry i dont mean to be rude but when it comes to getting a job in life then this piece of work will get his the job. he has done a awsome job and deserves the respect. nice work sytron i like it alot nice work. anymore pics that you have done for keytoon? and i love the name of your character. maxwell is a great name and im glad i have it also lol.

Nelis
10-01-2004, 08:39 AM
its nice to see how other people handle things..... a nice way of doing this kind of stuff....
nice work

is keytoon an company you work for or is that your company? just curious.....

greets

Sytron
10-01-2004, 08:51 AM
The Keytoon Team to compose it Alex Mateo, Jaime Maestro and me :)

greets

Jonatan | sytron
www.sytrondesign.com (http://www.sytrondesign.com/)

Ro3d
10-01-2004, 11:30 AM
Good image and great texturing. I like the fact that you have modelled the cracks and dents in the wall instead of relying on a bump map.

Although im not sure it deserves 4 stars?

ervine
10-01-2004, 12:40 PM
Don't get what all the crit's about... it's a texturing excercise and for that I think it looks great..

Crewler
10-01-2004, 03:59 PM
Very nice texture work! the window looks maybe a little bit small. The closeup you're posted looks very realistic, well done! :thumbsup:

mv
10-01-2004, 05:56 PM
Very nice.


Here I show an exercise of texturing for practice with my new wacom.


does that mean you hand painted all textures ? or is there a photographic base?

xLess
10-01-2004, 06:12 PM
omg! the second one really like real...

Sytron
10-01-2004, 06:35 PM
Hi

Yeah a simple bases :)

Jonatan | sytron
www.sytrondesign.com (http://www.sytrondesign.com)

CuTnPaste
10-02-2004, 05:00 PM
Umh... 4 stars ??

I mean, It is surely a good view for eyes...but..


:argh:
mr.potato "envy of the laser"

The Witch King
10-03-2004, 03:14 AM
Its great. It looks realistic.

LondonCarlos
10-04-2004, 10:40 PM
Nice excercise..... would love to see the base images used. Are they from a library? If so, which one?

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