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Wolfy Junior
09-30-2004, 03:36 PM
Hi all!
All is in the title... color will follow nearly... :buttrock:

http://membres.lycos.fr/wolfweb/elektra.jpg



http://membres.lycos.fr/wolfweb/daredevil.jpg



http://membres.lycos.fr/wolfweb/logan.jpg


http://membres.lycos.fr/wolfweb/wolverineVShulk.jpg

Ilikesoup
09-30-2004, 05:04 PM
First off, I really like your inking on these pictures, especially the subtle shading on Elektra and the body hair (ew!) on Wolvie. Anyway, here's the crits:

Elektra-- I wouldn't change a thing. Doesn't even need coloring. See above comment.

Daredevil-- There are some anatomical errors that need corrected. For example, with his left hand pointing forward (nice hands, btw) as it is his left bicep should be toward the viewer, not pointed up as it is. His abs shouldn't bulge like they do, and there should be a separation between his left and right pectoral and a lighter line of shadow below them. His left groin muscle needs to be refined a bit also. Lastly, I'm not fond of his angry expression. Looks comical, plus a blind man swinging among the rooftops should be focussing on where he's gonna land ;)

Wolverine (pencil sketch)-- Nice moody pic. Only crit is that his forehead is too big.

Wolvie vs Hulk-- Nice pic. Reference Wolvie's left arm (Hulk's too), as it looks a little off (can't put my finger on it). He should have much more body hair, too, especially on those arms. Also, keep proportion in mind--Wolvie's a short guy, I think only 5'4" or so. Assuming that, Hulk only looks about 5'10".

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