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09-28-2004, 04:25 PM
Hi I just started this girl... and was hoping for some critiques along the way to completion. Let me know the bad, the good, and the ugly..
09-28-2004, 04:32 PM
Here's the wireframe..
09-29-2004, 12:45 PM
The head is cool for me, but you can do it better!
Try to make a little bit smaller nose and eyes.
Maybe you can make bigger jaw, so it won't look like a fow. ;)
09-29-2004, 07:14 PM
the cranium is too small, the eyes are too big, and for a female, the jaw is too wide and goes too far back
eyes are supposed to line up halfway between the top of the head and the bottom of the chin, and a person's head is 5 eyes across. also, the jaw line comes up right in front of the ear, not behind
I didn't really notice any modeling problems, but you've got to fix the anatomical structure of the head and try to make it look more feminine
10-02-2004, 01:02 AM
Thanks for the advise guys.
Here are some of the changes that I made.. I'm still not done yet with the over all head.. but I'd love some more advise.
01-19-2006, 10:00 AM
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