Room With A View, Terry Riyasat (3D)

[BillSpradlin]

It looks nice, I have a few suggestions though. Your shadows are WAY too black, lighten those up a bit, especially under the tablea and the sofas. There seems to be a bit too much occlusion going on in the corners, especially where the walls meet the ceilings, did you use the Dirtmap shader for those areas? If not I'm assuming it's coming from the final gather, which you should tone down a bit for better results. A softer, more natural blend would be in order. The material for the couch looks rather odd to me, I think the issue is oversaturation causing them to look unnatural. The floor material looks a bit blurred and has some artifacts in it in some areas, I'd suggest using a higher resolution image for the texture and get rid of those artifacts, it looks like bad jpeg compression. Good luck and hope that helps.

[T-R]

Hey BillSpradlin,

Thanks for the coments! Thats some good advise. Your right about that texture, I dont know why I still have it:blush:. I''m going to make some changes and updatehttp://cgtalk.com/images/smilies/thumbsup.gif.

[FluKe73]

I think the outdoor picture is a bit to dark och hight contrast try to make it a bit brighter. It almost doesn't look like there is no window. Add som curtains as well.

I think the sofa looks really soft and inviting.

I tried to archive my thoughts in photoshop.... didn't get to satisfied with the windows.

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Hope you don't mind me altering the picture...

[T-R]

Well I made some changes, thanks guys for your comments.
New angle,BG,floor and colour corrections. I would like to add the curtains If i have time, but for now im pretty happy with this.

[BESTrin]

nice room. love the table. Seems like the windows have too much molding round them and the rest of the room lacks in detail. good work.

[dongallant]

The improvements made a big difference dood...looks great! good job! :buttrock:

[FluKe73]

Yes the changes really improved the picture!

[Firas]

waw .. this is one of few interier images done Maya and not on MAX .. but how much time to render ???? this is important compete with brazil.

[T-R]

Thanks for the comments!
Yeah Firas I notice that there arent very many interiors images done Maya. Well there arent many that are posted here at least. The render time was aprox 45 minutes redered at 820 by 486.sampling rate was 1 and 3. It was rendered at home on a p4 1.6 w768 ram. I also did a dirtmap pass which took around 15 minutes. If your intrested in more info on lights I can let you know.

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