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SirManfred
02-05-2002, 03:07 AM
Well... its nothing big really... and its waaay more WIP than anything... maybe... Well, i don't know if i will finish this one but if i get the time i will :)
http://gngd.jaggedpath.com/wip/landscapewip03.jpg

Cheers

SirManfred
02-05-2002, 04:48 PM
Wtf?
Allright... i'll *bump* it then!

I don't make landscapes that much so i would like to have at least one constructive comment if possible... :)
Thanks

Neox
02-05-2002, 05:01 PM
maybe you should add some details?

Mimus
02-05-2002, 08:05 PM
I think the DOF is really distracting. I'd concentrate on getting the scene organised and getting the details in there before adding the DOF.

The texture on the ground closest looks a little too much like noise. Use some bitmaps to add cracks. Also, the horizon looks as though it comes in too early. Add more behind it and lighten up the whole scene...

Keep working on it though, should be good when finished. :)

Mike

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