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uday kadkade
09-18-2004, 09:16 PM
its for the 10 sec club...
http://geocities.com/udaykadkade/10sec.html

OR
http://geocities.com/sent2udi/10sec.html

sonicstrawbery
09-19-2004, 11:45 AM
i recognized that voice...from The Big Lebowsky isn't it ?, about the poor Donny :)

Your animation is really good, however there are some bad things to correct, that movement of filling his glass with the bottle his strange, you should keep the arm bent a bit because actually it looks very tight .
There's a second strange thing, when the char is going to put the bottle on the table, the elbow is too high, you should put down the elbow controller sooner.

Hope you understand and it helps despite my english :)

Cipher

uday kadkade
09-19-2004, 08:01 PM
hehehe...yeah...its the big lobowsky.

it s for a monthly competition at the 10 sec. club...

i am glad u pointed those problems with the arms.I was kinda happy looking at his face...hehehe...Ok!!!gonna fix that ASAP!
still got a week to submit this thingy....
thanks a lot.

hugo.m
09-19-2004, 08:32 PM
Hey,

Your animations is looking good but I would suggest to improve the timing. Don't let his head move too much, maybe holding it for a few frames would make it look less distracting. Also, try not to let the eyes wonder around too much. Keep consistent with it's eye direction.

andy_maxman
09-20-2004, 09:21 AM
hi uday,

1) the feet - its nailed down to the ground

2) left hand - the action is linear when the left hand moves to hold the glass. the glass must be disturbed too.

3) facials - difficult to relate to the voice and lip sync

4) right shoulder - must animate it when he is pouring from the bottle

5) spine - looks stiff

6) and the things mentioned in the earlier posts.

my 2 paises

cheers!!

andy

uday kadkade
09-20-2004, 09:50 AM
thanks a lot guys...will make the changes and post it again...
andy_maxman: that troll animations is superbly done...
i like the cinematic angles done in it a lot..
cool work.

uday kadkade
09-20-2004, 06:31 PM
here's the Update..:)
its more of a blocked out than any thing else...
i decided to approach it with the silhouette idea.
i might add the drinking later....but not sure yet as theres nt much time in between the dialog.
please comment...thanks again..
the URL,s

http://geocities.com/udaykadkade/10sec.html

OR
http://geocities.com/sent2udi/10sec.html

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