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lildragon
02-04-2002, 07:13 PM
Heya guys, it's great to see some very good and early entries, I'm really looking forward to completing this model :)

Ok a lil background.

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Kar is a warrior of the Kaloas tribe. Kaloas are peaceful by nature, but now very battle worn by recent wars that unfortunately plagued the land. Such wars caused massive desolation of the lands and inevitably contaminated the earth and air.

The freak appearance of the Kaloas such as their elongated and extreme limbs were caused from extensive experimental radiation poisons leaking into once clean waters.

The Kaloas rely on their quickness and evasion skills, so masterful with melee weapons they find that the use of guns are meant for weaker races such as man.

Kar is one such warrior Kaloa, and he now steps out to aid his tribe and help rebuild what was once their peaceful land.
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Ok enough of that here's the concept I'm planning to model. I'm leaning towards his left glove. He has no shoes, that's because they're no shoes comfortable enough to be worn ;), plus their skin at the bottom of their feet protects them from the radiation, but they still need to detoxify their feet every few hours, or their skin starts to react like man's would. He'll have a detox kit on his belt.

http://www.eyecandystudios.net/renders/concept1.jpg

lildragon
02-04-2002, 07:24 PM
sorry guys my host is acting up, you should be able to see the image now

cerreto
02-04-2002, 07:50 PM
good start and very origional

Equinoxx
02-04-2002, 08:12 PM
good start indeed. tho you HAVE to make his helmet connect to somewhere :D that would be awesome.

MadS
02-04-2002, 08:28 PM
Cool. I like how you've exaggerating the feet and hands. I think this is the first Alien entry so far. :)

lildragon
02-04-2002, 10:20 PM
thanx guys

Equinoxx: great idea, will definitely add

MadS: yeh I was going for crazy limbs and a fun challenging character in general, can't wait to see the result in 3D ;) and I do believe you're right about the entry, altho it's still early... thanx again

Taoizm
02-04-2002, 10:31 PM
Wow...this one ought to be a fun challenge to model. Excellent start my friend.

Dan Dixon
02-04-2002, 11:20 PM
like I said very nice character lil it hard to come up with some origional for this challenage and you got a great start there . good work

Cédric
02-04-2002, 11:47 PM
Héhé,

I love the design of your character because it s not like the others...
I m waiting to see your wip with interest :)

Good work lil and enjoy...

lildragon
02-05-2002, 06:38 AM
Taoizm: oh yes and thanx ;)

Dan Dixon: I hope it goes well :) thx

Cédric: yeh I'm waiting to see also heheh :)

now to 3D I go

lildragon
02-06-2002, 09:53 AM
just blocking it out and nailing down the proprotions, also started some detailing.... crits welcomed

http://www.eyecandystudios.net/renders/body.jpg

if the above acts up, you can get it here http://www.playazz.com/temp/body.jpg

cheers

NowInc
02-06-2002, 10:13 AM
Ah....proof as to why I think its better for me to stay away from character modeling/design...

I love the concept (I have a thing for characters with big hands), really neat. Cant wait to see what he looks like when you are done..and even further..id love to see you drag out a walk cycle with him...

lildragon
02-06-2002, 03:12 PM
thx NowInc, I'm definitely making a walk cycle, think of how the Tauren walks in World of Warcraft, (you have to watch the trailer);)

http://www.gamerspulse.com/E3/2002/ECTS/screenshots/worldofwarcraft/Tauren01.jpg

regards

pascal_blanche
02-06-2002, 07:26 PM
do you have a link buddy? nice start by the way ;)

Flo
02-06-2002, 07:38 PM
nice concept.

try this one for the movie >
http://www.blizzard.com/wow/

lildragon
02-06-2002, 07:40 PM
here you go pascal http://planetmirror.com/pub/blizzard/WoW/movies/WoW-ECTS-2001-CinematicTrailer.avi amazing work by Blizzard as usual, and thx for the crits gents

Henrik Hörlin
02-06-2002, 10:18 PM
Allright! Very nice!
Like them feet! Very... big and scary! Love the proportions.
One thing though... wouldn´t he(?) look great in an elegant tail?
:)

Taoizm
02-07-2002, 01:26 AM
looking nice, looking nice. :)

CerberusC
02-07-2002, 04:07 AM
hey i want to see the head of your character NOW hehehe, it can be great :)

Bug_Eyed_Earl
02-07-2002, 11:02 AM
I Love the helmet. Is it going to be his only gadget gizmo deal? Perhaps a hip/back pack with a 'gas converter' (I dont know what your dude breathes :p ).

But I really like the almost atlantian mix of natural and man-made bits.

Is that thing on his left shoulder a tattoo ?

lildragon
02-07-2002, 05:40 PM
Henrik Hörlin: thanx ;) about the tail I was thinking that, an "elegant" like you stated would be something worth investigating, thanx for that :)

Taoizm: thanx bud more on the way ;)

CerberusC: I'm taking a different approach this time around, and leaving the head for last :) well b4 all the accessories

Bug_Eyed_Earl: Yeh he'll have more gadgetry once finished ;) he maybe tribal but they're an advanced race :D about the thingy on his left shoulder, yeh it's going to be a tattoo tho not that scrrible :)

thanx guys more renders on their way in a few minutes...

cheers

lildragon
02-07-2002, 05:55 PM
ok Just blocking in some details and adding more refine muscle structures... if you have any comments are questions feel free to ask....

That's it until after work :)

cheers

http://www.eyecandystudios.net/renders/kar_front.jpg
http://www.eyecandystudios.net/renders/kar_back.jpg

sorry 56k modem users, the file size is a bit high for you guys...

grstovell
02-07-2002, 06:58 PM
I am in awe! :eek: Not only is this a great concept (and awesome feet!!!!) but you guys (the big boys on this forum) model so fast!!!!!!!!

Great work.



-Greg

Taoizm
02-07-2002, 08:04 PM
sing with me now....He's a supa' freak... whooo-hooo :D

Looking good pal. I really like the way the muscle structure is coming along. Maybe a little more detail around the toenail though. After the great lead in they sort of fall a little flat.

Titan
02-07-2002, 09:28 PM
damn thats really looking good.....

lildragon
02-07-2002, 11:40 PM
the Rev.: thanx bud :), as for modeling fast is good but not really important in this challenge, keep that in mind ;)

Taoizm: I'm singing check me out http://66.70.72.50/forums/images/smilies/sing.gif http://66.70.72.50/forums/images/smilies/guitarist.gif heheh gracias mi amigo, the toes will be more detailed for sure, I'm just all over the place here trying to grasp the form better :)

Titan Gracias ;)

Some more updates coming tonight/tomorrow, and I'll be most likely starting the head this weekend...


cheers

lildragon
02-08-2002, 08:02 PM
Some more updates....

- I've added some temporary hands as I was getting tired of seeing the stumps ;)

- refined the detail a bit more on the muscles

- And most important I started the armour ;) don't worry to much about the lil hoops on the chest as of yet, it's there for a lil surprise, plus the one on the right will be gone once finished... stay tuned

http://www.eyecandystudios.net/renders/kar_front2.jpg
http://www.eyecandystudios.net/renders/kar_back2.jpg

cheers

Equinoxx
02-08-2002, 08:14 PM
I'm lovin the armor my friend.
and ya know the rest ;)

ether
02-08-2002, 08:33 PM
Cool stuff lildragon:) I like the way you did the armour and muscles on this character - very nice:)

lildragon
02-08-2002, 10:32 PM
Equinoxx:thanx bud, below are some closeups

ether::) thanx ether, I'm having alot of fun with this actually, and I've posted some closeups below... I really hope you're deciding on joining in the fray... ;)

thanx



- some minor updates and a closeup of the armour, I had to make the loop thingie swivel, so some of you should have an idea what it's meant for ;)


http://www.eyecandystudios.net/renders/armour1.jpg
http://www.eyecandystudios.net/renders/armour2.jpg
http://www.eyecandystudios.net/renders/armour2_wire.jpg

cheers

oozeballz
02-08-2002, 10:56 PM
really nice.. love the muscle definition... i think its looking really good..
just one thing though.. from the back view.. the ankles look a little streched... like bent clay..

lildragon
02-09-2002, 02:09 AM
thanx oozeballz(funny name :)) yeh one of my biggest challenges for myself is to make believable muscles since he's not going to be covered up but too much... I'm still learning tho, about the ankels yeh I agree, I'll fix that thanx... and here's a lil test I was playing with.... thanx for the rig Cemre

http://www.eyecandystudios.net/renders/kar_gi.jpg

I'll be modeling all this weekend most likely


Cheers

rendermonkey23
02-09-2002, 06:59 AM
Lookin good man, There's only one thing so far that kinda bugs me and it's the fact that there's no way he could stand up. The part of his feet that touches the ground is to far forward. He would just fall backwards. And I think his wrists are a bit too.... thick :) That is of course IMO.

Handsome fella though.

felix_man
02-09-2002, 07:37 AM
[There's only one thing so far that kinda bugs me and it's the fact that there's no way he could stand up. The part of his feet that touches the ground is to far forward. He would just fall backwards. And I think his wrists are a bit too.... thick]

I disagree. from the looks of it the legs will work just fine... especially when he is running full speed, digging those talons in!. as for the wrists. I think they are pretty cool, besides maybe the nuclear survivors need to eat lots of spinach. Anyway I just didn't want to see you change the wrists I love them and gives him a unique style. Great work man, now if I can just get on with my own entry...;)

cerreto
02-09-2002, 01:41 PM
you and shaun lupton seem to both be taking a xdugef aproach to your anatomy ! good stuff !

Martin-K-
02-09-2002, 01:50 PM
looks like the Xdugef approach is getting popular. im thinking that for my next model i will have to try that approach.

Cédric
02-09-2002, 05:05 PM
I love your hands :D

I m waiting for the head, héhé... :)

pabbloz
02-09-2002, 09:03 PM
Firstly I didn't like.... but now... he's going better and better so I don't know if he will my prefer one :)

Good arms!

Taoizm
02-09-2002, 09:12 PM
Damn :) I seriously think that recently your modelling skills have multiplied 10 fold. This guy is really coming along.

Is that a nail on the back of the foot/leg pointing straight down? Can we get a better shot of that?

Joebount
02-10-2002, 01:49 AM
guys, what is Xdugef ?

BTW, it looks cool, really like the design. :)
Radiation can do a lot of bad things on lezards !!!!! :D

muckywetnoodle
02-10-2002, 01:54 AM
nice musculature you have going there! The hands and wrists are still looking kinda chunky relative to the rest of the model though. Maybe add more definition to the wrists and elongate the fingers some.

lildragon
02-11-2002, 04:16 AM
rendermonkey23: yeh I fixed the feet lots, updated below, and the whole wrist hand area is temp, got tired of the clubs :), like the head :rolleyes:

felix_man: heheh nice explanation, I did update the feet tho, and about the wrist hmmmm

Martin-K- : although I'm using the Xdugef approach, it's still unique as they're no parcated polys ;)

Cédric: heheh, the start of the head is below ;)

pabbloz: heheh thx :)

Taoizm: :D and yes it is a nail, I didn't render a close up, forgot :) but I was playing around with a 360 degree rotation vr type animation below

Joebount: Xdugef :D ask cerreto for the correct meaning ;) and thx

muckywetnoodle: yeh like I mentioned above the whole wrist/hand area are temp for now...

thanx very much guys for the great feedback, keeps me driving, happy modeling

lildragon
02-11-2002, 04:19 AM
ok guys here's another update

fix the feet and as you may noticed started the head ;) I know it looks wierd but you'll see where I'm going in the coming updates... http://www.eyecandystudios.net/renders/kar_with_head.jpg

I've also been playing with a 360 degree rotation animation, it's not perfect and it's buggy but have some fun :) you can also right click and zoom in

VIEW ANIMATION HERE (http://www.eyecandystudios.net/renders/kar_rotate.html)

more to come, crits welcome

MadS
02-11-2002, 04:32 AM
Hey LilDragon. You already know how I feel about this latest update. Looks like it's heading in a much "friendlier" direction. I'm a fan of evil-badass looking, but this is still cool. If your GF says this is the way to go, then listen to the woman! :D Anyway, I am surprised that you decided to take the Xdugef approach on your modelling there. I don't know if I would want to adopt that technique yet, as I have problems with parcated polies, but it looks much more advanced. I guess I will have to wait and see! :)

lildragon
02-11-2002, 07:26 AM
thanx madS oh believe me, he's not that "friendly" really, more of a protector, the beginning of the mask fools you into believing otherwise I guess, but there's alot to be added to the mask still :) and the parcated polys you mentioned happen only with the xdugef approach, but we all knew that :)

thx

cerreto
02-11-2002, 07:30 AM
seems like alot of people want to try the xdugef aproach without thinking about the parcated poly problem its dificult but if you know what you are doing id sugest starting with form first

blc318
02-11-2002, 07:31 AM
What is the xdugef approach? Do you have a link or anything to some info on it. I feel Ive missed something. Great work Lildragon

cerreto
02-11-2002, 12:09 PM
It is just a modling method that lets you manipulte the polys difrently by doubling them at certain places and maunipulating them in a way formaly not used often ! afterwad deleteing the control poly but you can get parcated polys if your not careful ill get the article on it in a few days too dificult to explain if you ve never used the method or seen it

Taoizm
02-11-2002, 06:14 PM
Cerreto, I'm looking forward to seeing that paper. I've been scratching my head about the xdugef approach, and ummm....what the heck does it stand for?

Equinoxx
02-11-2002, 06:21 PM
ah yes the xdufeg appraoch. I was wondering what it was I saw bout your model . . . now I know.

Damn hard indeed . . . and even harder to explain . . .

cerreto, dig up that article man . . . it needs exposure . . .

lildragon
02-11-2002, 08:35 PM
heheh thanx guys :) I'm sure trav will post the explanation soon ;) (he better)

I'll have another update tonight...

cheers :)

cerreto
02-11-2002, 09:55 PM
landshark

lildragon
02-13-2002, 03:29 PM
HI guys, I know this is a wierd update, but he'll have more armour and greebles, keep in mind he's tribal

The hands and mask and basically everything is just the blocking out stage, I'll add all the extra detailing last

SEE A 360 DEGREE 3D FLASH VR HERE (http://www.eyecandystudios.net/renders/kar_rotate2.html)

http://www.eyecandystudios.net/renders/kar_thigh_pad.jpg
http://www.eyecandystudios.net/renders/kar_thigh_pad_back.jpg

regards

Equinoxx
02-13-2002, 03:31 PM
ya know what I think bud ;)

love the loincloth. not to sure bout the thighpad & the gray maskthing.

I'm sure you have it all figured out tho and they are just "early" references :)

ether
02-13-2002, 04:07 PM
Excellent stuff lildragon

I like where you're going with the cloth and armour - especially the cape. Are you using Sim cloth for that? Anyhow cool stuff;)

Error323
02-13-2002, 09:40 PM
Coool! Lilldragon! Only 1 thing... make the shadowmaps bigger... I asume this is 3dsmax :)

lildragon
02-14-2002, 01:44 AM
Equinoxx: thanx bud, the thigh pad will be refine for sure, and the face mask umm, I have lotsa work there ;)

ether: thanx luv, yes for the simcloth, if I can get reactor going then probably that, tho I don't think so, I'm adding more to the armour and stuff later when I detail... and I hope you'll be entering soon ;)


Error323: yeh I use Max, and I know the shadows are kinda blah huh? :) well I'll take your suggestion and give it a whirl ;)

thanx guys more to come tonight / tomorrow ;)

(maybe I'll find time to fix those bloody hands :))

lildragon
02-15-2002, 06:05 PM
just an update, blocked in some more details, feel free to ask any questions. 360 Flash VR is rendering right now

http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/test/Kar_per.jpg

http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/test/Kar_back.jpg

http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/test/Kar_front.jpg

and a closeup of the belt

http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/test/Kar_belt.jpg


cheers

Taoizm
02-15-2002, 10:13 PM
Pretty cool update. I like the necklace addition. works well with the belt. The arm wraps really help, but they're too symetrical. Break up the wrappings a bit for each arm, and maybe have the end of the wrap peeking out somewhere. Good work mate. :)

SirManfred
02-15-2002, 11:32 PM
One word: Supreme!

But i think that if he is going to stand like that he will fall backwards... right?

Danko
02-16-2002, 12:13 AM
Great job!
I specially like the legs muscles and the detail that tendons give to the feet. It looks very clean. Same for the armor and forearms, I like them that oversized. For me the head is maybe the weakest point although maybe it's still on an early stage to rate ;) . Very good job anyway, I love the overall!

lildragon
02-16-2002, 05:04 AM
here's the 360 view

VIEW 360 DEGREE ANIMATION HERE (http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/test/Kar_rotate.html)


Taoizm: thanx bud, and about the wraps peeling at the ends, most def ;)

Sir_Manfred: thanx, umm not really he seems pretty balanced on the legs...

Danko: yup the head is next on my list, and thanx much for the crits


more to come this weekend

Dan Dixon
02-16-2002, 05:21 AM
hay bud the wrap on the hand are on the button good job, but i'm not sure about the cape anymore but it could just be me. but it coming along great man.

Koma
02-16-2002, 06:27 AM
look really cool ,you make a great job ,one thing weird on the 360 .swf he look smaller when we see him from the back,but who care about that iam hurry to see when he will be finish . you can put more detail on the cape and the clothe beside is legs like little wave ...

Adam Klein
02-16-2002, 06:44 AM
I just saw the update, I really like! The arms are really lookin good with those wraps going on. I like where this is going!
Adam K.

Joebount
02-17-2002, 01:02 AM
Really cool ! I really love the design and especially the gloves (uh, I guess it's gloves ?). The real challenge will be the mask IMHO :-)

Impatient to see the next update !

Haldir
02-17-2002, 01:17 AM
I love your character...Especially his helmet, very nice.

I also like his big hands and feet, makes me think of Final Fantasy IX(Which by the way has some great character design).

Can't wait to see more updates;)

Keep up the good work.

Oh, and feel free to rip apart my character. http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=2435

dominicqwek
02-17-2002, 01:54 AM
Hi there! Great model u have, love his muscle structure, esp the thighs and feet. Is he a super hero of some sort? he looks like that with the cape and mask. Hmmm..creature design, now why didnt i think of that??!!! :D

I've got something started too, comment it. Wanna know where i can improve. Thanks!

Comment dom's work here (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=2405)

Oh by the way, thanks for setting up the preview pic page!

lildragon
02-17-2002, 03:42 PM
Dan Dixon: Hey dan thanx a bunch, as for the "cape" that's the thing it's not a cape :) it's a sash of rank, they'll be more done with it..

Gabe: Thanx Gabe and yeh I'll be fixing that problem in the swf soon :) and the cloth will be more detailed when I get to the last stage thanx

Adam Klein: thanx bud, more to come

Joebount: Actually if you ever saw the hand wraps that Kickboxers or boxers use, that's what these are... as for the head, I'm eager to work on it too, keeping checking, thanx buddy

Haldir: THe head is the worst part :p heheh but thanx, and I think many peeps seem to like the big feet/hand style, which is cool.

dom: Actually no, he's not a superhero :) as I mentioned above it's actually not a cape, it's a sash of rank in his tribe, a sash of rank is worn aver one shoulder and a cape is fastened at the neck and worn over both shoulders :D

thanx very much guys, back to modeling I go, update coming later today

Reo
02-17-2002, 06:56 PM
Yah I love the leg design....the walk for him will be very cool.....


not sure about the yellow IMO....but who am I to say..... : )


I think you've got a great thing going keep it up




Reo




broken_skull@hotmail.com

Equinoxx
02-18-2002, 05:54 PM
ooh yeah, lovin the belt my friend.
and teh tape round his wrists and hands are mucho phunky :)

you might want to give his loincloth a little thickness round the edges.

lovin it so far man . . .:D

Haldir
02-19-2002, 07:30 AM
Hey Lil dragon,

I guess when I said I loved the helmet. I meant in the illustration. I hope to see you capture the the same quality in the model(could be hard). I personally really like the cape/sash. I see where you're goin' w/ it and I dig.

One suggestion. With all that weight on those six toes, you might consider spreadin' them out a bit more and maybe havin' them compress a lil to give the character some weight. Maybe you hadn't gottent to that yet, just an suggestion.

Either way, keep it up... The model is lookin' nice. The proportions good. Are you gonna texture it? I Can't wait!

Here's mine if you wanna take peek.

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=2435&highlight=haldir

lildragon
02-19-2002, 03:57 PM
bRoKEn_CycLE: yes I've been thinkiing about the walk now all this time while I was building him :) the yellow I changed, I guess too many peeps didn't like it enough to prompt a change :P


Equinoxx: thx bud, the loin cloth will hopefully look thicker once I'm done

Haldir: ah ok :) unfortunately tho I changed the whole design, and I believe it's for the better :), you'll see it later today, once I get a good handle on the look of the mask, about the compression of the toes, I agree but for modeling I'm leaving it out, that's better suited for animation :)

lildragon
02-19-2002, 04:12 PM
new color and took off that crap noise material on the leather, I'm thinking of going duotone tho :) next update

http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/test/Kar_full.jpg

Maox
02-19-2002, 05:48 PM
LIl,, cool,, noww, start whit textures,, nice model,,

MarcosD (Maox)

lildragon
02-19-2002, 07:01 PM
Thanx Maox

Update:

- I completly redid the head
- Got the goggles pretty much done
- Started the mask and yes it's intentionally suppose to look like a face a bit :) intimidation I suppose
- yes I changed the color :P

http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/test/Kar_nomask.jpg
http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/test/Kar_nomask_side.jpg
http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/test/Kar_mask.jpg
http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/test/Kar_mask_side.jpg
http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/test/Kar_mask_closeup.jpg

cheers

Maox
02-19-2002, 07:04 PM
NIce,, LIl,, soon textures,,, i mean,, nop,,?

MarcosD(Maox)

Taoizm
02-19-2002, 07:30 PM
Looking real nice Lil'd. i like the addition of the mask. although the strap seems a tad too big. Maybe thin it down or split it. IMHO. like I said, looking good. :)

lildragon
02-20-2002, 12:58 AM
thanx guys, definitely look into that tonight Taoizm ...

here are the 360 degree rotations

I'm already aware of the shadow hiccup ;)

here are the "Flash VR" 360 degree rotations

View Kar without his Mask here (http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/test/Kar_nomask.html)

View Kar with his Mask here (http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/test/Kar_mask.html)

sigma
02-20-2002, 01:06 AM
wooh cool character LD. Coming along real nice. Love the definitions in his anatomy. The bandages are a nice touch. The mask is cool, maybe add some more detail to it like thin slits for breathing, like a vent maybe. The Head is lookin waaay better. Nice work bud.

:D

Poju
02-20-2002, 07:14 AM
i really like new head.

Koma
02-20-2002, 07:51 AM
yep really cool ,you are going on the good way budy ,the 360 are good but not perfect ,look your shadow attetively but who care this not the challenge

and hey if you a minutes check this and comments
i'am a new 3d users since 4 or 5 month so dont be to mad :
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=2317&pagenumber=2

lildragon
02-20-2002, 04:35 PM
sigma: thanx Sigma, yeh I'm still on the mask, ut I have the base down, so all that is left now is some detailing :)

Poju: thanx

Gabye: yeh the glitch in the shadows are an error on my part, will be fixed next time... and you're plumber dude is cool btw, I love the Benz symbol :)

Danko
02-20-2002, 05:40 PM
I dig a lot on the new face!
It's a pitty that the mask hides the nose and mouth, you could try to make a smaller mask/rebreather. Just a thought ;).

Jenn
02-21-2002, 12:52 AM
Just have to say that I wish I was this good!!! - he is amazing and the mask and goggles make him look really mean - heck he just looks totally menacing - keep up the good work:D :D :D :D

KOryH
02-21-2002, 05:38 AM
I don't know if I have said this yet, but, This guy is really cool. I love the porportions and the weight in the design. He feels like he wants to be animated. Actually I would love to animate a dude like this. He has very good legs for running and jumping. Almost like a kangaroo with a very bad attitued. Actually it reminds me a little of one of the characters in Tank Girl. very cool indeed.
Keep workin!

l_farley13_l
02-21-2002, 09:52 AM
What a Freak! Major improvements in the body and more improtantly the face. Though a little more detail can never hurt :)
The feet still kinda bug me though, they seem a little flat, maybe look at the bones of a kangoo's foot ? (there is some odd lump about halfway up his foot) Awww who knows I'm no expert on what ever he is ;)

see you,

Farley13

lildragon
02-21-2002, 05:36 PM
Thanx again guys,

Danko: yeh I know but it's cool, he can take it on and off

Jenn: hehe thx, and as for the menacing comment, awesome I'm glad it's showing thru

KOryH: you and me both, I'm itching to animate him, just gotta add more detailing to the mask, feet, armor e.t.c , b.t.w love your style man

l_farley13_l: nice suggestion will look into it


and here's the sword he'll be carrying


http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/wip/sword.jpg
http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/wip/sword2.jpg

cheers

ether
02-21-2002, 09:33 PM
Hey lildragon -

Cool sword:) Like the handle. Is it your own design?

cerreto
02-22-2002, 12:53 AM
very cool ! sorry no crits just looks nice

lildragon
02-22-2002, 02:58 AM
Hey thanx ether :) no it's not my design, it's a dwarven battle sword from the game rune :)

Cerreto, thanx bud more coming

cheers

Jonas
02-22-2002, 12:08 PM
Really nice sword Lildragon!

/J

Martin-K-
02-22-2002, 01:27 PM
very nice mate. likes a lot. with texture that sword should really shine

lildragon
02-26-2002, 07:08 PM
thanx guys, here's the final update then I'm texturing and rigging...


- the accesories have to be attached
- I posted big renders so you can catch the details
- I'll be adding more as I texture

so here's the updates


http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/wip/Kar_final.jpg
http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/wip/Kar_final2.jpg
http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/wip/Kar_final3.jpg
http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/wip/Kar_final4.jpg


c&c welcome of course

cheers

Martin-K-
02-26-2002, 07:11 PM
love the 3rd render. now if you could only make kickass textures to compliment it. id be happy :D

Taoizm
02-26-2002, 07:14 PM
wow, lil'd . SCHWAY model. the hair plugs are the best touch. :)

Equinoxx
02-26-2002, 07:48 PM
lovin it lovin it, but since you allready know that, and there ain't nothing usefull in gettin some lovin, here's some crits that you can consider my friend ;)

1st off, the hairplugs . . . make more, make em fatter and rounder.
the gloves, tho an excellent extra, are lookin not all that imho. they go thru the mesh at verious places and look a little to uniform to be casually applied "boxing" tape. but I'm sure you allready noticed that.

the bo, is an excellent weapon good job on that. I think that it could use some peeling "skin" I don't know the english word for it, but you know what i mean . . . bark I think is the word :D

that's about it . . . lovin it as a total man :)

Tennis
02-26-2002, 09:02 PM
hi bud,
he's getting better and better, i love his new mask.
looking forward seeing him textured :)

Taoizm
02-27-2002, 12:58 AM
EQ, I agree about more hairplugs, but the staff is pretty good as it is. Last thing you need is a rough staff giving you splinters. :)

sigma
02-27-2002, 02:24 AM
Hot dam! that model improved alot. Love the detail in the mask.
Only thing that continues to bother me are the ears. I cant see the ear cavity.
Maybe its the shadows?. Great work LD, looking forward to seeing him textured.

:)

cerreto
02-27-2002, 06:42 AM
looking great lil d ;)

SheepFactory
02-27-2002, 06:50 AM
holy **** , i havent checked the challange section for a week, i am simply amazed how the concepts turned into reality.

wonderful model lil-d , no critique here , just envy.

time to start modelling :)

A|i

[msf]
02-27-2002, 09:08 AM
reminds me of the disney gargoyles cartoon :)

I like that cartoon hehe

pabbloz
02-27-2002, 11:48 AM
I love the knees and the elbows.
I'm agree to add more hair.

I'm looking fordware a good texture and Illumination render! :)

Good luck in the next steps!

lildragon
02-27-2002, 07:36 PM
Wow!!, big thanx guys

Martin-K- : thanx bro, I'm actually turning tail and rigging first, I need a good solid weekend just for texturing :)

Taoizm: thanx bud :D and ain't that the truth about the staff, ouch :)

Equinoxx: you're right more plugz coming :) and about the hand wraps yeh I noticed it but didn't bother moving the verts
:o and I think Taoizm is right about the bo :D

Kenneth_fejer: thank ye

sigma: yeh it's the shadows, because I did put them in :) plus his ears are in a wierd position

cerreto: thanx trav

Sheep Factory: heheh, yup and you better get cracking man, you have roughly two weeks :p

[msf]: Hmm never thought of that, true and I also loved the show

pabbloz: hey the great pabbloz :D and yup more hair and I might do another GI render

again thanx very much guys the 360 rotation is coming in a few minutes

cheers

lildragon
02-27-2002, 07:41 PM
ok here's the 360 Flash VR rotation to play with

VIEW ROTATION HERE (http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/wip/Kar_final.html)

you can now see the feathers and stuff behind him ;)

cheers

MadS
02-27-2002, 07:48 PM
You already know how I feel about this guy. I just wanted to say, you are making me jealous with your fancy dancy presentation. :D Am I going to have to hire a hitman to stop you now before you texture that bad boy? Awesome job so far. I especially dig that velvety cape.

Taoizm
02-27-2002, 08:04 PM
man, o man...amazing that they let this sort of talent in here. Freaking nice. :D Now a little texture, and him wailing on someone with the staff. ahhhh yeah!

Lorenzo
02-27-2002, 09:35 PM
One think I realy like is the model, sam kangaro man.
Nice work
Laurent:rolleyes:

lildragon
02-28-2002, 12:01 AM
thanx much guys, glad you like the flash and the model :)

I made a better viewable version here

VIEW UPDATED FLASH ROTATION HERE (http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/wip/Kar_finalx.html)

cheers and thanx again guys

CerberusC
02-28-2002, 03:33 AM
i LOVE the model, but i like so much the first head...but i LOVE your model (i like that muscles hehehe )

lildragon
02-28-2002, 03:13 PM
CerberusC thank ye :)


ok guys I was setting up the rig last night and was so impatient I had to slap it on Kar :) I did a really nasty quick motion test, but it turned out descent enough to show (I think) I didn't even adjust any envelopes(3DS Max 4.2) it's really noticable in the tip of the ears :)

but anyhoo here ya go, crits especially needed on this, as I'm what they call a "raw animator" :)

THE BONES TEST HERE (http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/wip/Kar_bone_test.avi)

and

THE MESH TEST HERE (http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/wip/Kar_mesh_bone_test.avi)

Taoizm
02-28-2002, 05:15 PM
damn lil'd...for a quick dirty test that motion came out pretty smooth. I'm impressed. :D Even with the default envelopes he looks pretty good (ignoring ears, and the major joints)

lildragon
02-28-2002, 06:40 PM
thanx Taoizm :) and yeh I have a full weekend to tweak and pose this beast,

Martin K mentioned the darkness of the mesh render and I have to agree so here's an updated animation, divx fudged the colors good tho :(


btw you'll need divX http://www.divx.com/download/downloadlist.php?typeid=1 if you haven't guessed :)



VIEW MOTION TEST WITH MESH HERE (http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/wip/Kar_mesh_bone_test2.avi)

Titan
02-28-2002, 08:59 PM
That rocks!

Its always cool to see a model taken to the animation stage!

Great work man, keep it up!

Dan Dixon
02-28-2002, 10:38 PM
that look great the deformation look good . the ears seem off but it a test .I'll tell you it sure is coming along awesome bud.

lildragon
03-01-2002, 06:10 AM
Many thanx guys, and Dan yah the tip of the ears aren't influenced by the head bone that's why it floats... this was just a simple test that I enjoyed doing :) much more to come, also does anyone have any reasonable good ideas for animating cloth in MAx? I'm thinking simcloth, prob is the calculations can be murder!!

let me know,

cheers

Equinoxx
03-01-2002, 12:55 PM
you could always try the flex modifier, but you won't have collition detection . . .

lildragon
03-01-2002, 06:04 PM
actually I went with simcloth, hear me all simcloth is AWESOME!! here are some quick test, I will have tons of time to tweak it later, oh and don't pay attention to the pinned sash at the end :o


and I know about the EARS :) there's no envelopes for them :)


THE CLOTH BONE TEST HERE (http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/wip/Kar_cloth_test.avi)

and the mesh test ;)

pardon the cruddy render

CLOTH MESH TEST HERE (http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/wip/Kar_cloth_test_mesh.avi)

c&c welcome

cheers

tilt
03-02-2002, 01:32 AM
it kinda reminds me of soulreaver, good work thou. like it a lot, keep it up =)

lildragon
03-04-2002, 03:03 AM
well didn't get much response on the last post other than tilt's thanx bud so here's an update

here's the final motion test, I'm not working on this any further, time for textures

things I'm already aware of

- the cloth sticks have to change the slip in the parameters
- The left arm pops a bit towards the end of the motion
- the hair is not animated
- the strap on his left thigh goes thru it, have to use surface contraints for both that and the necklace ;)

finally the motion isn't solid and there's hardly any secondary motion, but this is just a test

c&C welcome

you will need divx and it's 950kb

VIEW THE FINAL MOTION TEST HERE (http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/wip/Kar_motion_test.avi)

cheers

Adam Klein
03-04-2002, 03:20 AM
nice:)

I like the character, great hands! I think he'd look good with some toe movement in those steps and with some buckling muscles on the thigh/quad area especially due to the stance and leg style. and maybe a bit less dramatic torso bend too, just a thought. just a test I know;)

keep it up!

AK

Taoizm
03-04-2002, 03:39 AM
fix the above mentioned, and you have yourself a grade-A piece there. :) Looking very, very nice lil'd. Just a few more days to tweak the settings. ;)

SEL
03-04-2002, 05:18 AM
Hey first off i dig the motion test to see how the character works, as with everything, to achieve greatness takes time. More though, I would vote for your character as one of the best because your one of the few who actually started from nothing and went through the stages to show your work from final to end as well as answer questions the same time, that I appreciate for we are all here to learn and get better, that is the purpose right!?!. I have a question for you though, I was wondering as far as how you achieved the green background spotlight effect where it was smooth, did you just get a plane and tilt it up and then create a greenspot light or is it some plugin in 3dmax. Curious? Also I know you already said there is no secondary motion, but what would be nice is to get those hands moving, just wondering if you binded them yet to the skelton. There so big and developed, you can almost bring the character to life if they moved. Great to have you here by the way....


shaun

Dan Dixon
03-04-2002, 06:28 AM
awsome lil great work on the cloth and binding can,t wait to see the animation that you were talkin about bud

lildragon
03-04-2002, 05:09 PM
Adam Klein: Yup that's all planned in the final movie I'm going to animate him in ;) think Blizzard's WoW trailer

Taoizm: thanx alot buddy, yeh I' having tons of fun with him

Shaun: wow thanx shaun, that's really appreciated, for the green bg effect it's pretty simple actually, it's just a plane on for the floor (not tilted) and the illusion is caused by using a gradient ramp for the enviroment bg, I will send you a .max file to look it over ;) and for the hands believe me I know what you mean heheh, thanx again

Dan Dixon: thank ye Dan, speaking of cloth, I can't believe how well you got yours done, do you have any good cloth textures? or for that matter does anyone?

muchas gracias mi amigos

cheers

Joebount
03-04-2002, 05:26 PM
VERY VERY VERY GOOD !
You can rest now :)
Will you work on the textures ?

SirManfred
03-04-2002, 06:45 PM
Extremly cool
But his arms are stiff as a poker

OZ
03-04-2002, 08:01 PM
MASSIVE!!! I LOVE the sword and the biiig feet!!! MASSIVE!!

LichiMan
03-04-2002, 08:31 PM
WOW!!
Great character!! I can't wait for the textures :D
I love his hands.
I want more!! :D:D:D

Cédric
03-04-2002, 10:13 PM
AWESOME Stuff Bud ;) I really like it !

I can't wait the FINAL motion, with the hairs which move, and so on... A little background too? héhé :)

Really a great stuff man,

see you soon on Icq or Cgtalk ;)

Keep on rollin' bud

BASSit
03-04-2002, 11:12 PM
Originally posted by lildragon
. . . do you have any good cloth textures? or for that matter does anyone? . . .

Hi lildragon,

first i have to say that your work is amazing, but i think you know that already... so i am looking forward to see a textured version soon ;) Maybe you know this link already, but some nice cloth-patterns can be found here:
http://www.graphics-muse.com/gimp/patterns.html

I´ve attached a little example...

And now finish that animation !!!!!!!!!!!!

lildragon
03-05-2002, 03:13 PM
thnx much guys, Bassit I actually found an amazing high quality texture resource that I think everyone can benefit from

http://www.fortunecity.com/skyscraper/sun/57/clothpage.html

to the rest I'm texturing this badboy believe me, but I spent most of last night re-rigging his legs, man they were bad :)

more to come

-cheers

NANONEEN
03-05-2002, 03:34 PM
good work lildragon
and thanks for the texture link!

lildragon
03-06-2002, 06:42 PM
thanx nano, and here's the direction I'm going with the textures
http://lildragon.cgcommunity.com/wip/Kar_leather.jpg

I'll be tweaking it more, like more scratches and the like comments welcomed :)

-cheers

Equinoxx
03-06-2002, 06:45 PM
hehe that's lookin REAL sweet bud . . .

and defo add more scratches and the likes ;)

Totitch
03-06-2002, 10:52 PM
I 've just seen your Final motion test!

It's really great!

What about a run-cycle!
I will enjoy see his massive legs stretch!
A little short with him runing and jumping over a ravine will be so nice!

Great work! Waiting for texturing too!
You started very well!

muckywetnoodle
03-07-2002, 12:27 AM
Nice work duder! For the motion test it would be nice to see some movement in his hands as well. The rigidness of the hands really stands out. I really like the motion of the cloth. The texturing on the leather is looking good too. Keep on rockin.

lildragon
03-08-2002, 11:43 AM
Thanx, guys, I haven't gotten what I wanted done for the challenge, ie texturing, (but then again it's a modeling challenge right? :)) but here he is nonetheless

After this challenge I'll be continuing work on him in the coming weeks as I'm very excited to get him animated into a short movie, roughly a minute in length, it'll be an adaption of the World of Warfcraft trailer ;) ,yes that's right full musical score and the whole shebang :) this will be posted in the 3D artworks section,....soooo without further adue, here's my final piece (to bad there's only 24hrs in a day :))

http://www.eyecandystudios.net/renders/kar_pose1.jpg

I can just imagine him textured :)

soon. soon

cheers

Werner
03-08-2002, 01:16 PM
Very good modeling! I love it!

Cédric
03-08-2002, 02:27 PM
Ah yeah bud :)
I love it... And i like the pose very much... Good stuff... :D

fellah
03-08-2002, 04:27 PM
nice one indeed. I like it MUCH MUCH more now without those basic colors you had on him before.
it's great modeled and it would be a perfect character if the future textures hold the same quality. *looking forward to the short* :)

Taoizm
03-08-2002, 05:47 PM
very cool lil'd. this model really came together. something to be proud of. Can't wait to see him textured, and animated. :D

lildragon
03-08-2002, 07:26 PM
Thanx much guys, I'm glad you like it, and the animation I have planned will definitely be shown on cgtalk :) and yeh Taoizm I'm extremely proud with this model :)

here's a corrected update, I fixed a few things

http://www.eyecandystudios.net/renders/kar_pose3.jpg

a su salud

rendermonkey23
03-08-2002, 07:32 PM
Nice dood.... really nice.

I really like the belt... and the finger nails are sweet

MoonDragon
04-06-2002, 11:14 PM
Wow lil dragon! I'm so impressed! (please don't forget to post the final render with textures to WH :) )

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