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Davain
09-15-2004, 12:54 PM
Hello everyone,

A day ago I have posted this animation:

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=169880

in the "Finished Work: 3D and Animation" forum. I would appreciate you to critique every single aspect of it. Mostly I am interested in critique of the textures and the total look.

The Animation was done with Maya, Photoshop and AE as college assignment. Here is a direct link:

Animation (http://stage.co.il/media/mindknot372584.avi)

Thank you.

justicart
09-17-2004, 03:28 AM
pieces seem to fall un-naturally. the recoil on the winding is good.

texture looks good, except it seems blocky - maybe its just from the compression. Lighting makes it kindof flat. maybe add some dramatic spotlights with contrasting shadows. two in front and one in back.

Davain
09-17-2004, 10:08 AM
Thank you for the suggestions

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