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Blackhorse
08-09-2002, 03:45 PM
Hi guys. Above all, thanks for your viewing.
I just keep trying designing charactors. This is the serial of "moon", see the sign of her.
I just post it here for the comments to improve it. The color pic of it will be posted later.
So thanks a lot.

yours

Rick:bounce:
Blackhorse
08-09-2002, 03:47 PM
from the back
Blackhorse
08-09-2002, 03:52 PM
Yes, I know the fists are not normal, but I personally think that is not too important. Maybe to the serious person that would be dem wrong. So fix it! Well, I got it. Next pics I show you would be better and better. I never give up.
Thanks my friends.
wyktor
08-10-2002, 01:13 AM
cheers,,

I don't think that fists are the main problem. Try to do the arms little more subtle. They look more like arms of the man to me. Also the way how you draw (short strokes) makes it more difficult to follow the main character lines. I like the character it just need little cleanup.
Blackhorse
08-10-2002, 05:17 AM
Oh, thanks.
I just wanna make her strong enough.Maybe I did too much strike line on her.Yes, I'll fix it.
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