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AlliS
09-07-2004, 06:27 AM
Hi all.
Ive been working on a serier of shorties.. here's the second "episode".
I would love to hear you C&C before I hit the final render.

here you go.. Nose 2.avi (DIVx) (http://www.embrya.se/movie/nose2.avi) .. please tear it apart!

Thanks in advance and taking the time!
cheers
/a.


and oh! episode 1 can be found here nose1 (http://www.embrya.se/movie/nose.avi)

Tom W.
09-08-2004, 12:50 AM
That was pretty funny made me laugh. Especially his unsuspecting crazy run :D.

The only problem I had was with the last 3 seconds, seemed like he lost some wieght. Play with COG?

Liked your anticipation, arc's, timing and overlap. Well done.

-Tom

captainboom
09-08-2004, 04:41 AM
JUST HAVE TO say NASTY NASTY...and little more Nasty.


The over-all Animation is good........I would maybe throw in a couple more camara angle..ie like a trunk in to the dudes butt-hole..as he puts it in the THE BLUE GOAT GUY face or something...
just make it NASTY NASTY! BABY

anyway made me giggle


CAPTAINBOOM!

holbroal
09-09-2004, 08:37 AM
I agree with the above replies, good animation overall.


I suggets moving the torso of the tied up character, even just a little bit, to show he is struggling against his bonds, especially towards the end when he really wants to get out of there.

AlliS
09-10-2004, 11:36 AM
thank u all!
I have made some changes to it and posted in the finished forum. would love to chitchat with u in there. Here's the link. (http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=168544)

captainboom - so you dont think its immature enough already? :)

Tom - Fixed.. i hope.. let me know what you think!

holbroal - agree!.. second renderpass is on the way.. thanks!

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