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hey there ..I'm working on this new character (cartoon style)..
C&C are welcome
http://www.intelligentproject.it/nikipersonalfolder/child.jpg
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update and more views
http://www.intelligentproject.it/nikipersonalfolder/child_up.jpg
danielkenobi
09-07-2004, 07:34 PM
Nice caracter, nothing to critic yet, the only thing that I dont like is the hair, may be because it does' nt have a shader yet, but could you post a concept sketch to know what look are you going for.
wow niki, very sweet model! :)
thanks guys for your replies... I got inspired by this guy, take a look at his gallery (in the characters gallery there is a artwork called "Little Lulu and Buttons" ..that was my inspiration)
http://www.madcreator.com/gallery_frameset.html
Zapan
09-08-2004, 01:12 PM
Yeah very nice character
Love the fact that she has no mouth , kind like a doll or something...very cool
Looking for update !!!
dcmoutinho
09-08-2004, 01:25 PM
hi Nikki,
good inspiration, the modelling is nice, the shoulder is just a little strange...
thanks guys ..
small update.. I adjusted the shoulders ...
tell me what do you think about the size of the shoes... small or big shoes??
http://www.intelligentproject.it/nikipersonalfolder/child_up01.jpg
flyingP
09-08-2004, 08:45 PM
cool, loved the stuff at link you posted too, think you need to make the limbs even thinner/stretched though "if" you are trying to emulate that style, looking forward to seeing it progress :)
and the shoes...
http://www.intelligentproject.it/nikipersonalfolder/child_up02.jpg
I need your opinion about the texture for the dress: what is the best dress ?
Scottish cloth or Bear cloth ?
http://www.intelligentproject.it/nikipersonalfolder/child_up04.jpg
http://www.intelligentproject.it/nikipersonalfolder/child_up03.jpg
Jenesis1214
09-11-2004, 09:28 PM
I love the bear pattern more so than the plaid, but both work. The bear, however, gives a more personalized look to her, and adds to her personality...Depending on how old you want her to come off would help determine the pattern. When I was a little girl I would have probably worn the bear dress up until 7 years of age. The plaid dress would work up to about 12 years.
Hope this helps :wise:
Thank you Jenesis1214 for your suggestion ...she is 7 or 8 years old.. so I think the bear cloth will work very nice...
SuperXCM
09-12-2004, 03:21 PM
I prefer the bear cloth too!:thumbsup:
It's more original than Scottish cloth, and it look like more as the universe of madcreator.
i think. :shrug:
..and the bear cloth is ..
http://www.intelligentproject.it/nikipersonalfolder/child_up05.jpg
danielkenobi
09-16-2004, 11:15 PM
She is goig so good niki. Is she going to have a mouth right? or it will be only on the texture. I saw the concept And I think she have a realy big mouth.
I like the bears buy I dont know why I like more the pic where they are closer.
She is goig so good niki. Is she going to have a mouth right? or it will be only on the texture. I saw the concept And I think she have a realy big mouth.
I like the bears buy I dont know why I like more the pic where they are closer.
thank you ..she'll have a modeled mouth ... yeah!! I liked when the bears were closer ..I dunno maybe I'll change the cloth ...
bRuNuShky
09-17-2004, 02:26 PM
Great!!! ...look good ....when she will have hands???
the bears are ok, but try abother if yuo like....can we see some wired?? http://www.cgtalk.com/images/icons/icon10.gif
I will wait to see it in a cartoon style render.....
nemirc
09-17-2004, 03:59 PM
And again, I am late :drool:
Anywayz... I was thinking that the hair looks too "lowrez" compared to the rest of the character. Maybe that's the look you are after but it just looks weird to me :shrug:
ok ..I will post the wire tomorrow ..now a little update
http://www.intelligentproject.it/nikipersonalfolder/child_up06.jpg
Hi Niki!
I loved your work!:love:
You are a gret modeler!!
Vayu
www.vayu3d.com (http://www.vayu3d.com)
florian
09-23-2004, 03:44 PM
Weird girl
no...not you. Your model. (but in a positive way)
But perhaps you should decide first what's the "meaning" of her. (Yep my english sucks)
It's not clear if she is "just" a cute girl, or if she has a "psycho" attitude.
Your start looked better. I like her not having a mouth. (Just my opinion)
But for sure your avatar looks good :rolleyes:
BTW queixada rocks.
Try this as a musical reference www.fourversus.com :wip:
(still in development)
Weird girl
no...not you. Your model. (but in a positive way)
But perhaps you should decide first what's the "meaning" of her. (Yep my english sucks)
It's not clear if she is "just" a cute girl, or if she has a "psycho" attitude.
Your start looked better. I like her not having a mouth. (Just my opinion)
But for sure your avatar looks good :rolleyes:
BTW queixada rocks.
Try this as a musical reference www.fourversus.com (http://www.fourversus.com/) :wip:
(still in development)
yess... you're right florian.. I'm still undecided about her meaning.. some times I think that she should be cute and sweet and some times I think that she should be a bad kiddo!!!
hey ..what do you mean: " Try this as a musical reference " ... musical reference???
Atwooki
09-23-2004, 04:55 PM
Nice start, Niki !
Haven't heard much from you since the 'seahorse' thread ;)
Watching with keen interest :thumbsup:
Ciao
Atwooki
florian
09-24-2004, 02:11 PM
hey ..what do you mean: " Try this as a musical reference " ... musical reference???
queixada seems to have some same influences like our band. I don't know how you are connected to them. Perhaps you like that kind of music or just want to support them.
Of course it has nothing to do with your work. (BTW sorry for beeing off topic)
Now to something completly different :D
For sure it's a challenge to have both. A girl that's so sweet that it scares you. ok...you can go the easy way and give her pure white eyes or something. Maybe a headless teddybear can do wonders? well...I'm more like a technicall modeler than a creative person.
Anyway good job so far.
:thumbsup:
looking forward to a update
-> florian : I support the queixada 'cos they are my friends .. and I like that music!!
your idea of headless bear is great .. I thought to model a big dog (I thought about a bull-terrier) and to put it in the same scene, maybe she could hug the dog .. but I will think about your idea .. thx a lot
thank you Atwooki too ...ciao!!
danielkenobi
09-28-2004, 05:17 AM
I like her mouth. Please make an update on the hair!!! that is the only thing that it keeps bothering me.
Keep working :thumbsup:
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