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cserbuj
09-06-2004, 11:55 AM
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Title: Sunrise In Venice
Name: Carlos Serrano
Country: Espana
Software: 3ds max

Render inspired in Venice (Italy). Made with 3dstudio max 6 + vray + photoshop 7.
I hope you like. Please, comments and critics are wellcome.
http://www.xente.mundo-r.com/3dcarlos/3dpiks/renders/venecia1024.jpg

ramius
09-06-2004, 03:32 PM
Wow!!, very well done!

graffb
09-06-2004, 05:08 PM
this is the fantastic! I like it!
Very good lighting and and.. and
CONGRAT!

unwrap
09-06-2004, 08:05 PM
It's a really nice work. I love the sunlight here.
But, I think you could improve the render. Add some more details and fix the bump on the ground near the camera. :)

tnemeth
09-06-2004, 10:10 PM
It's very nice, love the mood. Two things. As mentioned, the bump map on the ground near the camera needs to be lowered, and the railing on the roof could show up better, maybe a little more anti-aliasing would do the trick.

Hamburger
09-06-2004, 11:48 PM
Wow, this is fantastic. A lot of the time when people do outdoor realistic scenes the lighting of the scene is a different colour to the background image, but you've matched it up nicely. The bummaping on those buildings is awesome, it doesn't look like a flat plane but rather a nice concrete wall with a lot of detail to it. Also I think you might wan't to turn down the bumpmap on the concrete under the railing just a fraction, it's a bit to strong. I love the water too. Good work!

yangmiemie
09-07-2004, 06:36 AM
nice work!
good lighting
can you show your WIP?

Ecleposs
09-07-2004, 06:56 AM
great work:)
only one thing i dont like..its the fog in the back of the ally ithink its too heavy to be along with this sky and sun light

ThomasMahler
09-07-2004, 10:51 AM
Great work!

2 crits:

1) The street on the left corner of the screen could need a better texture.

2) The fog seems a little strange.

Other than that, it's awesome, really!

cserbuj
09-07-2004, 11:32 AM
Thanks to everybody for the critics and comments. I will take note of them.
:)

Frenkie
09-07-2004, 06:37 PM
Wonderful, i only miss the caustics from the lower level of the front side wall. It would give the image motion.

shards
09-07-2004, 09:27 PM
really awesome work!!I love it!

another minor point: I get the impression that I can see the ground behind the water in the foreground, (I dont know if this is just a my impression or you made it so) this looks a bit strange because:
1) in venice's canals, water is greenish and dirty so you cannot see the ground (your seems fresh clean water)
2) water level is much higher than that..

anyway this is great job for sure!keep it up! :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

cserbuj
09-08-2004, 06:47 AM
hi oblivionblack, what you see, really are the stones of the water. But the reason of that is just artistic, esthetic, cause i have never been in Venice, but i wanted to give it my style. Of course, it could be better.

Thanks !!!:):)

Alistar
09-08-2004, 01:21 PM
This is amazing I totally love the lighting. But still you could add some interesting details on the ground close to the camera. Some small grass between the tiles or and insect on the tube would add more charm to this illustration.

k4k
09-08-2004, 01:40 PM
nice one! :thumbsup:

DanielVFX
09-15-2004, 12:32 AM
i dont like the sky looks so flat

mattgamer
09-15-2004, 03:18 AM
Aww, if the water were not so shallow I would dive inside it! Heehee!!
Wonderful soft image. I love it.

mG

Rass
09-16-2004, 06:35 AM
Good Work man! :) i like textures

TonyWang
09-16-2004, 02:40 PM
I still do not go to Venice , but these works are personally on the scene by me ! Too beautiful , the quiet surrounding feeling of soft sunlight all lets me be fascinated .The qualitative use of material is also very apt .The small suggestion : The camera is given some angles toward the left again , and the street lamp modelling probably can be more perfect . Learn to you ! Be infatuated with the country in the civilization ......:thumbsup:

teknoz
09-17-2004, 11:12 AM
good work . nice rendering .

good luck

Deeug
09-18-2004, 04:53 PM
When you see something like that you became...speechless!:D

Great work on texturing&lightning :thumbsup:

Ali Imran Zaidi
09-21-2004, 12:19 PM
:) Hi.
Your concieving power is good and you done a nice job,
:thumbsup: Lighting is fine.
:) Modeling is perfect.
:) Sky is natural, sometime its flat don't worry.
:thumbsup: Really awesome composition........


:love: Carry on I love to watch this image...........

techart
09-21-2004, 02:07 PM
a la Sequier my friend..love it

one crit only:the closer ground's texture is to small...put a big resolution one

my opinion

cool stuff

easydoesit
09-22-2004, 10:34 PM
I've actually walked past this spot. Pretty cool. Thanks for the memory.

SHREK5
09-24-2004, 07:45 PM
well done.. may be water could hv had more realistic look...

John L. Doe
09-26-2004, 01:24 PM
Mapping on the buildings is really nice,lightning too...but..materials such as that chain and those ornaments on the railing look kinda "plastic"...and that water looks kind of odd...bump map too strong in down left corner..
But like you wrote, it's your artistic approach and from that perspective I think it's really great..

:)

][ndy
09-26-2004, 02:13 PM
Ah, Venice...

This picture makes me wanting to do go to venice for a vacation.

nymbis
10-01-2004, 04:20 PM
Beautiful Scene. Lighting is Very nice. :)

agmihred
10-03-2004, 11:47 AM
great work man:bounce:

i like it a lot:love:

i think y need be carful with a textures near a camera .because y use a some resolution for near and far texturtes.

Eomer41
10-08-2004, 09:54 PM
Looks great. :D

The only things that I have noticed, that could use some improving, is the textures near the ground close to the camera, and the rails on top of the roof.

darktenp
10-09-2004, 09:50 AM
Good Work man! goog textures.

attila
11-05-2004, 08:59 AM
Nice render!

You spanish people always make the best architectural renderings!
Probably you know Juan Siquier (http://www.JuanSiquier.com), he is the best I think, but at first sight, I thought you are him :)
Keep going!

cserbuj
11-05-2004, 09:29 AM
Thanks all!!!

Yes, i know Juan Siquier, a really great artist. (saludos Juan;)) And to me is an honor that you thought that I was him. I know that i am not at his level, of course, but i try to do it the best i can.
Really i am glad, my render has given me many satisfactions. ;)

VirtualEye
11-27-2004, 07:26 AM
Its really admirable, specially the texture and lighting,,

But If you let me put on some critics
the footpath floor is a little over sharpened, which make it a little unreal as compared to the rest of image. Also there should be some roughness in the red building.
The shadow of lamp should eilther be sharp or blurred, not the combination of shadow skelton and its blurryness around the shadow skelton...
(Please Take these suggestions from my point of view and not offense )

BUT, over all , it a beautiful work ,

Regards.

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