Character: face

[hpslashluvr]

how did you make the skin shader? and the lighting? i am always trying to figure out how ppl do that

it looks very nice, i think the eye shader needs some work and you'll be set to start hair and crap like that ;) i think the ear could use some detailing, but you'll prolly need to post a 3 quarters view

[dcmoutinho]

skin shader is good, but the eyes could be better...

[ranjan]

guys thx for ur reply, here is the 4 sides
http://home.bizhat.com/ranjan/face2/3-4view.jpg

[ranjan]

hi everybody, i am just started modelling body, but i can complete it only with urs help, help me by comments please!!!
http://home.bizhat.com/ranjan/face2/5.jpg

[varun050]

nice ,,too early to crit i think ,,,,keep it up ,,nice:)

[farzan]

the body is looking ok so far.
although you should try adding alittle more details.
keep it up

[voodoochile]

The head looks good, the first image looks really good. (great skin BTW, how did you go about this?)

The head doen't look as good in the side views, the ears are too far forward (should be about half way) I know he's not truley realistic, but just looks a bit odd.
Where the cheek joins the nose (about half way on the nose), maybe bring the cheek in a bit, the nose seems to disapear into the cheek at this point.

Body, so far doesn't have the same amount of detail as the face, so bit hard to give feedback at the moment.

[ranjan]

http://home.bizhat.com/ranjan/face2/6.gif
can i start modelling hands?:)

[hpslashluvr]

NO. jk haha of course you can

but to admit the truth, i thought that was a girl the first time i opened the page (to the last few pictures). the hips, the waist, everything except the face

i'd look at a more "typical" reference but i suppose it's your choice...but fix the waist and hips at least

[earzquake]

good work on the face. :buttrock: I knew he was a man since Ive seen his face (cuz his mouth is exactly the same mouth keanu reeves has :D ) the problem I see is in the body. It looks much more woman-like :shrug: I think you got to make his back wider... well, have a look at some reference pics.
Another thing to critique can be the back of the head. See the sideview and youll notice his head is a bit squashed.
Gbye

[ranjan]

thx for ur reply "earzquake", I dont have any ref pictures please give me some if u have




http://home.bizhat.com/ranjan/face2/7.jpg

Now hws the anatomy

[earzquake]

Have a look at fineart.sk. There you can find some ref pics like this one: http://www.fineart.sk/photos/anatomy4a/018.JPG
Hope it was helpful :D
Keep it up!

[ranjan]

thank you "earzquake" for ur link, does anyone have a image frm side view and top that'll be helpful

http://home.bizhat.com/ranjan/face2/8.jpg

[ranjan]

I just want to rename name of this thread "face" to "face and body" how can i do that

[earzquake]

1.for reference pictures go to the website ive posted in the previous msg.
2.dont know how to rename your thread.
now your model looks a bit better :) keep working
byeee

[hpslashluvr]

don't worry about the thread title, worry about the actual modeling ;)

you can pm a mod to ask, but it's really not important

i think from the side view, the stomach down should come out a little more maybe? i could be wrong here

his arms look awfully skinny for his chest

[ranjan]

i changed a lot. hws the anatomy now?

http://home.bizhat.com/ranjan/face2/09.jpg
http://home.bizhat.com/ranjan/face2/10.jpg

[nwargasm]

The nose looks a bit long and The mouth from the side looks like its a bit flat, it could be a bit rounder folowing the skulls teeth. Good job so far, it's coming along nicely.

[jcdenton182]

Maybe the head is a bit huge in comparison with the rest of the body. Anyway that model is pretty cool :)

nwargasm >> if only I was there in SD too... I hate France :sad: You're so lucky you knew that ??

[ranjan]

thank u for yoy replys, i did some changes as u guys said. The face part i will do at last(i already painted the texture without asking yours:sad: :sad: ) any way i'll correct the length of nose. I modelled a hand for him as a test (to check can i do it:) ) comments please!
http://home.bizhat.com/ranjan/face2/11.jpg

[ranjan]

hey i'm back after a short break, nose length reduced is this enough?

http://home.bizhat.com/ranjan/face2/12.jpg

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