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Androgs
09-04-2004, 02:03 PM
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Title: Beauty Of Aged
Name: Andrew
Country: Indonesia
Software: 3ds max, Photoshop

Heya all!!I found a cool reference from painter cd, So..I decided to play more in texturing, just a little project to break my spare time.
this one done in max 6 default scanline render and standard lighting, with post prod in photoshop.

Any feedback are very appreciated here. Thanks for your time.

Frenkie
09-04-2004, 04:19 PM
Nice image.

DrakeX
09-04-2004, 06:49 PM
the shadows look a bit dark especially considering the bright / reflective stone everything seems to be made of. but i <3 it nonetheless :love:

Inxa
09-04-2004, 07:27 PM
hi,

thats wonderful....
great loook friend...:thumbsup:

one thing i thought looks different...the map size...their feel is big..especially the far building.

one thing....the window on the far building..top left corner...I dont know what it is may be the angel...but i can see the sky..through...well its a Boolean problem, glass reflection dont know...but i guess that wall is open. Do check that too.

But Final look very nice.
Cheers,

Inxa

Ecleposs
09-04-2004, 08:22 PM
nice image indeed:)

Ls3D
09-04-2004, 10:48 PM
Nice, fun lil zine,.. I think some flat areas, without so much bump would complement the organic stylee,.. kinda looks full of noise now. Also on the alley wall, the texture is a bit uniform top to bottom, how about some rain stains, slightly clear area, layers of finishes.

I really like how the wall extends in ruin at the corner! So hopefully you will be inclined and free to continue a great start.

-Shea

leealex
09-05-2004, 04:58 AM
i agree with ls3d that its' too bumpy and noisy. I think it'll look better if the values are lowered a little or else Good job on the overall!

Androgs
09-05-2004, 08:39 AM
Hi all!! Thanks for the vote and a good crits:). yeah, I have to agree for the thing that already mention by all of you, many...many Thanks for the feedback. I think what I must notice carefully for this image is the bump issue.
and Inxa, the window is a reflect texture..but yeah..its kinda odd,hehe:D.
Frenkie, DrakeX, Inxa, Ecleposs, Ls3D and leealex_2005...:) I thank deeply for the comment and crits to my image, they all very appreciated and read carefully.:D

NBCROU
09-27-2004, 06:42 PM
:thumbsup: nice!! I don't english!

NBCROU
09-27-2004, 06:46 PM
nice image indeed:) But I don't english!:shrug:

darknessbeast
09-27-2004, 07:53 PM
good work nice texture and good render it is really good:thumbsup:

DanielVFX
09-28-2004, 01:20 AM
excelent work
in my opinion its so sharp and much bump, but still a good work:)

untilitsleeps
09-28-2004, 09:31 AM
I think the bumpy and sharp is just the right for thät one :)

Androgs
09-28-2004, 10:48 AM
:D :D Thanks all!!! many..many thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate that, I hope I'll able to produce a better one after this. yours all kind words are motivate me:) !

karanta
10-07-2004, 04:23 PM
Beautiful work!

mimawoai
10-11-2004, 12:00 PM
its' too bumpy and noisy.

shweta
10-31-2004, 12:29 AM
http://www.cgnetworks.com/gallerycrits/71261/71261_1094302984_medium.jpg (http://www.cgnetworks.com/gallerycrits/71261/71261_1094302984.jpg)

Title: Beauty Of Aged
Name: Andrew
Country: Indonesia
Software: 3ds max, Photoshop

Heya all!!I found a cool reference from painter cd, So..I decided to play more in texturing, just a little project to break my spare time.
this one done in max 6 default scanline render and standard lighting, with post prod in photoshop.

Any feedback are very appreciated here. Thanks for your time.

this is really impressive . i am new to cg and started learning graphics last month ....can you guide with some stuff i am building?

Androgs
11-01-2004, 01:44 PM
kerstin, Thanks for your comment.:)

mimawoai, Yeah..Thanks! I also noticed that problem..hehe.

shweta, Thanks! I would suggest you to take your time study a lor from tutorial form book or net. there also a good tutorial in 3dtotal.com. in that site, I have found a lot of similar tutorial for making a "dirty" scene .:D Good luck.!

attila
11-05-2004, 10:19 AM
Good pict!

(You may use less bump...)

clever_guy
01-28-2005, 07:15 AM
Stunning!! Great style!!

:thumbsup:

-CG

enterasan
01-31-2005, 03:50 PM
very high bump :( but good work :)

ironic440
02-09-2005, 03:56 PM
Nice work.:thumbsup:

Androgs
02-10-2005, 05:54 AM
Attila Deak, Thanks for your kind word and suggestion :), I agree with it and should more careful for bump work on my next work. Thanks :).

Clever_Guy, Thanks, glad you like it:).

enterasan, :)Many Thanks for your observation.

ironic440, ;)Thanks for your kind word!

Rasyidxtreme
12-02-2005, 10:26 PM
:buttrock:wedan lah ndrogs...impressive work man...can't wait to see more of your superb work!...

--- cheers ---

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