CGTalk - Demo Crits Demanded

FLX

09-01-2004, 03:00 AM

hey folks... just working on a new reel... and i NEED assistance. i just want advice on what i should include/exclude.... better ways to present it, audio changes, etc... just anything AND EVERYTHING
i am going to be adding the word "animation" to the beginning and i miight change the look of it (opening)... especially if u guys suggest it.
the black at the end is for the credits and breakdown.... so dont say anything about it!!!

http://www.flxdigital.com/warped/demo.avi (http://www.flxdigital.com/warped/demo.avi) 12.2mb divx5.02

AND IGNORE THE VIDEO QUALITY http://www.warpedanimation.com/phpBB2/images/smiles/icon_evil.gif
and please dont comment on some of the actual animation.... most of it is old and in need of replacement... that is sometihng for my next reel... but if u do have some good critss about some oc te clips, let me hear em

here is the completed reel from last year for comparison
http://flxdigital.com/Demo.mpeg (http://flxdigital.com/Demo.mpeg) mpeg1
http://flxdigital.com/Demo.avi (http://flxdigital.com/Demo.avi) divx5.0

FLX

09-02-2004, 05:03 PM

new wip demo to show... some adjustments... still have to finsih the creditsand fix the opening.
Please, i need more imput on how to present it.

http://flxdigital.com/warped/demowip.mpeg (http://flxdigital.com/warped/demowip.mpeg)

JBarrett

09-02-2004, 06:44 PM

"Demo crits demanded" ? This subject line on your thread is going to turn off most people from even reading your "demand," let alone offering any assistance.

SheepFactory

09-02-2004, 06:51 PM

I second justin , you are in no position to "demand" anything , next time try kindly "asking"

FLX

09-02-2004, 06:54 PM

sigh... i didnt think "demanded" was going to b take so seriously... my appologiesfolks

Capel

09-02-2004, 07:08 PM

well, your new demo is definately more well put together than your old one. I'd get rid of the opening screen with your name and that blue logo. It's on there way too long, and i was frustrated, wanting to just see your work. I'd imagine the studio guys that have seen a hundred demos in the same day would probably eject the tape or fast forward and miss your first animation, which is your best.

FLX

09-05-2004, 09:49 PM

good call chapel.

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