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GameFace
08-31-2004, 04:57 PM
Hey fellow people lend me your thoughts on my first animation reel

www.ruelproducitons.com/ruel (http://www.ruelproducitons.com/ruel)

ps. also my recent thesis is on the same page you can take alook at that too.

mummey
08-31-2004, 05:17 PM
This should probably be in critiques, not in general discussion.

Also, your first url is misspelled.

-b

Hey fellow people lend me your thoughts on my first animation reel

www.ruelproducitons.com/ruel (http://www.ruelproducitons.com/ruel)

ps. also my recent thesis is on the same page you can take alook at that too.

leigh
08-31-2004, 05:26 PM
Please don't post stuff like this in General Discussions. I've moved it to a critique forum for you.

mummey
08-31-2004, 05:34 PM
Damn, that was quick. Leigh must be spying on my cgtalk usage again... ;)

Anyways, I took a look at the reel. Two things stuck out at me when watching it.

The facial expressions were tough to understand sometimes. Perhaps eyebrows or moving ridges in the forehead could help convey emotion.

The other was the characters' back motion. There didn't seem to be much. The characters appeared to have stiff backs. It left me wondering if the characters could bend over to pick an item off the floor. It didn't look like they would be able to.

Cheers,
-b

GameFace
09-01-2004, 05:48 PM
My bad leigh ill keep it in the critique forums.

Thanks Leigh. Ive had a problem with stiff characters. How do you think i would be able to loosen up my work.

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