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Blackhorse
08-06-2002, 03:25 PM
I am just the first time here for post the recent designing sketch with a new charactor who has a "moon style" hair.
I just did the sketch, so there are some problems on it. Please give me some of the professional advice. I need the comment from the charactor designer to improve my experience of charactor designing. Something about the problems which every freshman would have, something must be paid attantion to, and how to improve the details.
Well thanks a lot!

Blackhorse:)
puddlefish
08-08-2002, 08:36 AM
generally a nice drawing, although the pose is a little unnatural.
As regards crits, I'd say that her bladed weapon seems a little impractical, as it would seriously hamper her arm movements, for fear of cutting herself. Also the perspective on her feet looks a bit off, and her breasts look strange.

Also, I feel that the whole piece is undermined by the absurdly large copyright sign.

Hope this helps
eigam
08-08-2002, 07:51 PM
Nice conceptual drawing but there are a few things wrong with the anatomy. I don’t mean to be harsh but your anatomy needs some work. Her hands and feet especially. Her face looks ok, but as puddlefish pointed out her boobs look odd. With a little bit of tweaking the picture can be great. This is just my opinion, don’t give up just keep trying. Good luck. :)
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