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New
08-26-2004, 05:38 PM
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Title: My Dear Egg
Name: Mario 'marius' Martín
Country: Spain
Software: Lightwave, Photoshop

Isn´t lovely to see how an angel is born?

I´m glad to show you the image I just finished (is still hot :]). About 1.200.000 polygons and 6 hours of rendering time, the clouds at the back are painted in photoshop (no generated nor photo) and I don`t know what can I say more.. :_]

What do you think? I want your crits.
Thanks.

PeterSanitra
08-26-2004, 07:34 PM
Uff, man these 2 ju..,ti.., ufff.....:eek: I`m in love.

PERFECT!!!

Reality3D
08-26-2004, 07:49 PM
It's cool. I would have tried to do a more dramatic lighting and give more detail to his wings and egg. And his back pose is a bit strange :hmm:

CharleyBoy
08-26-2004, 07:59 PM
Wow fantastic!!!

Something tells me that you'll be on frontpage soon...

dcmoutinho
08-26-2004, 10:59 PM
good work...
the shaders its amazing !
wire, please

J.K.Makowka
08-26-2004, 11:34 PM
Somehow I always imagine the wings of angels a lot bigger.

Oh and that looks like a really well done female body mesh... I would love to see wires of it too.

HOON
08-27-2004, 12:22 AM
Wow, Mario this is fantastic! great concept and execution! it was such a pleasure seeing your work in progress too.
now the image have such a great color pallette, and the concept really stands out!

great work, you are A master of Lightwave modeller

New
08-27-2004, 12:39 AM
Thank you!

J.K.Makowka: I think like you, I preffer bigger wings on angels but well, I decided to do little wings because I think that fits better on the composition of the picture.

And of course, I will put some wires.

http://marius.scenesp.org/gfx/forums/egg02.jpghttp://marius.scenesp.org/gfx/forums/egg03.jpghttp://marius.scenesp.org/gfx/forums/egg04.jpghttp://marius.scenesp.org/gfx/forums/egg05.jpghttp://marius.scenesp.org/gfx/forums/egg06.jpghttp://marius.scenesp.org/gfx/forums/egg07.jpghttp://marius.scenesp.org/gfx/forums/egg01.jpg

cycom
08-27-2004, 02:15 AM
Ooo la laa! The way she pose is so sexy! Maybe you can add more expression on her. Nice modelling and composition! :thumbsup:

seger
08-27-2004, 05:48 AM
The wire is absolutely impeccable although her legs seem a bit awkward. But very good.
Still, I have some crits about the scene. The pose seems to be made be someone who couldn't get his fantasy to a halt. It's all so overdone, the arch in her back, the twist. And really, most of all, the whole drama is on the tacky side. Girl meets egg. I would expect someone with modeling qualities like yours to (shit, I don't want to offend but I have to speak my heart) come up with something more.. clever? ironic? unique?

Again, many compliments on the mesh. I couldn't do it like that.

MuzzzY
08-27-2004, 09:34 AM
:love: :love: too sexy!!

xjgd4321
08-27-2004, 10:41 AM
Nice image. Absolutely excellent modeling!:cool:

RealityDistortion
08-27-2004, 11:35 AM
Damn she's sexy !

Nice pose... Did you use a skeleton or did you model her directly in this posture ?
I like the shaders too, particularly the skin one... wich software did u use for render?
Front page material, hum ?! Héhé;)

Congrat'
Nicolas

Proteo
08-27-2004, 01:47 PM
excelent!! :)

eres el puto amo Mario xD :thumbsup:

Z1K0B4
08-27-2004, 02:19 PM
HAHA! Nice wire shot. Is that wire porn?


Money!

BRUTICUS
08-27-2004, 02:30 PM
I agree that her expression could be more of anticipating her chlds birth, witnessing the miracle of life,...

remember dr hamond in Jurrasic Park,.. only hotter

great concept and modeling, could use some tweaks with lighting

New
08-27-2004, 04:28 PM
Damn she's sexy !

Nice pose... Did you use a skeleton or did you model her directly in this posture ?
I like the shaders too, particularly the skin one... wich software did u use for render?
Front page material, hum ?! Héhé;)

Congrat'
Nicolas
Hello RealityDistortion,

I modeled the woman in the clasical T way. Then, once modeled with all the dethails I re-modeled it to that posture without using bones, anyway I thought on it but I decided to get the posture on modeler when I realised about the complexity on the crotch and pompis zone. Handle that zone with bones is painful. :_]

smooth
08-27-2004, 05:02 PM
its so damn sexy man...really nice poze...and nice model too:)

BillSpradlin
08-28-2004, 01:44 AM
Everything is illuminated good globally but there just isn't much mood to the scene. The drab expression on her face enforces that that even further. It's a great piece though and with a few changes and adjustments it will turn out very well.

Daemos
08-28-2004, 12:26 PM
Yay it looks good and my first name is marius yay :D

dulixiaoxian
08-28-2004, 12:34 PM
i like it!i like the shader :applause:

New
08-28-2004, 12:55 PM
Hehe, my mother call me marius so I changed my handle by marius. Isn´t cool hearing your mother calling you by you nickname? Thanks nameshaker! :]

Soon2bAnimator
08-28-2004, 04:41 PM
*heart beats really fast* i think im in love really awsome model, at 1st i thought her but was kind of akward looking...but then when i saw the wires i saw it was right on the money. I guess it was just her position and the camera angle that make it look weird...but wow awsome stuff.

Vulcan
08-28-2004, 05:41 PM
Great work!

Still learning to model the human figure myself. I would really like to get a better look at some of the edge loops you used around the legs, and at some of the geometry around the knees, your setup does a nice job at subtile detail in the legs and preventing creases in the bent knees.

Already useing a few things I picked up from the wireframes you posted and incorperated them into the model I'm already working on, unfortunatly theres not enough geometry to make it as pretty as yours!

Could we get some images of the wireframes before you posed her for educational purpouses? :-)

BTW How much remodeling did you do to get her posed the way she is without using bones? Did you just basicaly pose her and then smoothed things out? Or are we talking about a major rework of the geometry flow?

InAction
08-28-2004, 07:44 PM
Is it only me, or does it look like she doesn't fokus her eyes on the child and egg? ^^;

Pau1
08-28-2004, 08:54 PM
really cool ,my mum says

SoLiTuDe
08-29-2004, 06:26 AM
damn... hottie... talk about a turn on :thumbsup: Great job on everything... but I agree... the facial expression could show something more like joy... or more anticipation... she looks a lil worried, but it's still an amazing job! Keep it up

neelz
08-29-2004, 09:14 AM
What worries me most is... how did that egg get there? Did the sexy angel lay it? Most have been hell to push out :)

But good work indeed, it's maybe a little TOO sexy (with the arc and whatnot) but I like it and I like the idea :)

digones
08-29-2004, 03:09 PM
Marius, I just need to say that your image is simply amazing.


Awesome work, and don't care about the pose cause it's perfect :)

hanzo
08-29-2004, 08:40 PM
very nice, I like that woman... :love:

pearl3d
08-29-2004, 09:17 PM
perfetooo......

excellent.......

amazing...........

New
08-29-2004, 10:37 PM
Great work!

Still learning to model the human figure myself. I would really like to get a better look at some of the edge loops you used around the legs, and at some of the geometry around the knees, your setup does a nice job at subtile detail in the legs and preventing creases in the bent knees.

Already useing a few things I picked up from the wireframes you posted and incorperated them into the model I'm already working on, unfortunatly theres not enough geometry to make it as pretty as yours!

Could we get some images of the wireframes before you posed her for educational purpouses? :-)
I´m glad the wire pics has helped you on you model and yes, you can use that wires if you wish.



BTW How much remodeling did you do to get her posed the way she is without using bones? Did you just basicaly pose her and then smoothed things out? Or are we talking about a major rework of the geometry flow?
Nothing of remodeling in terms of topology, simply I was lot of time dragging poins to their places. Get luck with your model.

Reality3D
08-31-2004, 12:58 AM
Good Wires. By the way, the render is native lightwave or maybe fprime?

WHH
08-31-2004, 02:04 AM
wow, so sexy

winson88cn
08-31-2004, 02:25 AM
A sexy angel!!!

RafaelCordoba
09-02-2004, 11:13 AM
amazing!

but she couldn't fly with those tiny wings heheh :-)

New
09-02-2004, 01:30 PM
Yes I've rendered it using fprime. It really speed up the workflow, very fast with global illumination and raytracing.

Hake Oslo
09-08-2004, 09:47 PM
Nice work. While I do think the pose is a little strange I would have to say that overall its a great image, very provocative.

Love the wires :-)

Ali Imran Zaidi
09-19-2004, 04:37 PM
You done a greate concept. good modeling and nice topology of her body, and good texture in Lightwave.......................

Bimo
10-11-2004, 09:02 AM
that's totally awesomehttp://cgtalk.com/images/smilies/grin.gif. i can see Dali's style in u're work. i dun really like the grass though, they seems kinnda flat, but thats not a big deal anyway. awsome job u got therehttp://cgtalk.com/images/smilies/wise.gif

Lexo
10-12-2004, 08:48 AM
very sexy girl..!

attila
11-05-2004, 09:44 AM
Beautiful angel-girl! Good work!

bart b
12-14-2004, 01:28 PM
That looks great .You did a wonderfull job.:thumbsup:

Dakota North
01-25-2005, 05:49 PM
Fantastic rendering!
The hours it took for this piece is well worth it!
Fine work.

Ayen
01-29-2005, 03:13 AM
Amazing work! especially the girl’s body, she looks so beautiful and realistic. The lighting looks perfect and the character design looks great!! I love it!

However, I think it will be better if the background modeling is as soft as the character is, then the character will match the background more, the tree stick, grass and the land are kinda hard edge compared with how soft the body looks.

Very remarkable work though

I would love to see more of your stuff

Again, Excellent work:thumbsup:

ZouhairY
02-06-2005, 04:50 PM
what a beautiful body.......!

linen_umbrella
02-26-2005, 09:37 PM
First off I cannot believe this thing would ever win an award, other than the fact that I know these boards are infested with males. Her waist is ridiculously small, she must have an inhuman spinal column to sit like that, the lighting is off, and the grautiously nude angel's wings look like they're made of foam core.

On the other hand the composition has good contrast, the "Egg birth" is extremely interesting to look at, and the girl's feet and hands couldn't be any better.

New
02-26-2005, 11:50 PM
Thanks for your critique linen_umbrella. My intention making this was on doing a good picture using the natural attraction female body has. I believe I have obtained what I wanted.

I am sorry that men look like to you like a plague. :]

linen_umbrella
03-01-2005, 07:40 AM
I am sorry that men look like to you like a plague. :]

"I am sorry that men [seem like a plague to you.]"
Viva English.

Since you were going for "attractiveness" and that's what you feel is attractive than I change my mind and think you did a good job of whoring her up.

New
03-01-2005, 12:01 PM
Sorry about my spanglish.

Gaara_06
03-20-2005, 10:23 PM
I like her body shape and her skin tone she's hot but I would like the wings a little bigger but still she looks good great detail I love detail.

Animeloser
03-28-2005, 04:48 PM
Its lovely!!

TETRAGRAMMATON
07-26-2005, 11:12 AM
:love: :love: too sexy!!

Nice image. Absolutely excellent modeling!:cool:

I can only quote this is such a perfect work.Wonderful.:applause::applause::applause:

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