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ErAn-C
08-26-2004, 10:49 AM
Hey.
This is the first thread on cgtalk.
I'm ErAn, 22y/o from Israel, Modeling with Lightwave.

Here's my new character I'm workin' on. I call him BunNy.
Yeah, I know u might think that the name doesn't really fit him right... but just wait :)
The only problem i'm having is that i need some motivation, and fast!
So, this is where u guys come in.... :)
C&C always welcome.

BunNy (For now) :
http://imageuploading.com/040826/1093515860_tmb.jpg (http://imageuploading.com/040826/1093515860.jpg)

fried
08-26-2004, 02:53 PM
It looks good. imo think you should make the ears bigger.

MediaM
08-26-2004, 04:06 PM
i agree, those ears are non-existent. but otherwise looks cool

GlasS-
08-26-2004, 04:06 PM
hoho! nice
make the ears bigger tho, would look better..

ErAn-C
08-26-2004, 04:33 PM
Heh...
I've got a feeling u don't like the ears :shrug:
Well, as u can see, he's not supposed to be realistic,
and the small ears are part of the style..
Hmm... well, if it's that bad, i'lll make them larger.
Thanx for the comments! Keep it up.

JeffPerryman
08-26-2004, 05:15 PM
What a Massive brute!!! :)

I would have to agree about the ears, they seem to be very out of scale and place.
Try some diffrent shapes and play around with them. They also look to me to be a bit low and too far back on the head.

Do you have any concept sketches that we can see? It would be cool to see where you are heading with this beasty. :D

ErAn-C
08-26-2004, 06:11 PM
Thanx Jeff :) and everyone else.
Okay, y'all got my promise. the ears will be taken care of!
It's just that for now, i rather deal with the body.
p.s. he's gonna have 2 extra ears anyway :shrug:

Here's the situation for now:

http://imageuploading.com/040826/1093543090_tmb.jpg (http://imageuploading.com/040826/1093543090.JPG)

Well, I don't have the concept scanned, all I got to show u is the side view I made.
I know, I've made a lot of changes, but the idea still the same,
check this out:

http://imageuploading.com/040826/1093543581_tmb.jpg (http://imageuploading.com/040826/1093543581.JPG)

Again, Thanks.

AmirP
08-27-2004, 10:41 AM
Hey Eran :)

Hope you fill better

As for the ears, I like the idea of making them small, but it mite be too much, and still i think they should be closer to the head even if its not realistic, any way the rest of the model looks great, the muscle and bone structure on the sholder looks very good, the chest could use a bit more work, but the way its connected to the arm is very good.

I think you should give more volume to the belly, it looks a bit flat right below the belly button.

Keep it up :thumbsup: . Amir

ErAn-C
08-27-2004, 03:34 PM
Thanx Rune! (Amir) :)
I feel a lot better.. at least now I had some time for myself to work on BunNy.
I appreciate the C&Cs. I just want the whole shape before Fixing these problems.
so please, keep the C&C coming.

Well, anyway,
I started workin' on the lower body:

http://imageuploading.com/040827/1093620209_tmb.jpg (http://imageuploading.com/040827/1093620209.JPG)

ErAn-C
08-29-2004, 08:06 PM
Hey people :scream: ,
Here's another update.


http://imageuploading.com/040829/1093809713_tmb.jpg (http://imageuploading.com/040829/1093809713.JPG)

Volcandro
08-29-2004, 08:15 PM
Funny Style yep
Good Modelling.

Rodi
08-30-2004, 06:20 AM
Yo Eran, the Bunny is looking 'sweet'- can't wait to animate it ;-)

roli
08-30-2004, 09:01 AM
Looks like a good modeling job you're doing over there. Its looks somewhat what crazy with this big ears, does the character have a story behinde it?
Can you post a wire?

mimo8
08-30-2004, 09:40 AM
BIG FUN
great modeling

Amir
08-30-2004, 12:54 PM
In my opinion the character shows alot of potential, a good humoristic character with a twist. I am curious to see the final touches... will the ears stay at the same size? will there be another leg? it will be interesting to find out.

bastiaan
08-30-2004, 01:18 PM
dude.. wicked style!... You make it look deadeasy!

DaddyMack
08-30-2004, 01:41 PM
somebodies been eating their wheeties...
It's looking clearly defined and clean. I like this so far, sorry no crit @ th mo

assafk
08-30-2004, 02:21 PM
Great model!

I like the style, and the modling is really good.

maybe u can post some wires?

ErAn-C
08-30-2004, 06:19 PM
Heh, It's great hearing your comments.

Volcandro - Yeah, I'm trying to keep my character as un-normal as I can :)
Makes them more interesting, for my opinion.

Rodi - Sorry man, but this is one character I wanna practice my animation skills on.
doesn't mean u won't be able to play with him too, he looks friendly enough, right? :)
that's gonna take a while... I need to rig and tex first!

roli - yeah, he's got a story.
the idea, in general : an Ex-con Pizza dude with a bunny suit.. of course :)

mimo8, bastiaan, sumdumguy - thanx

Amir - Everything and much more will be reviled on the next episode..!
I won't leave him with one leg. but about the ears - as i said - I just want the whole
mesh before deciding that.

assafk - Thanks dude. sure, here:

http://img80.exs.cx/img80/912/BunNy023Wire.th.jpg (http://img80.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img80&image=BunNy023Wire.jpg)

aLxDesigns
08-30-2004, 06:47 PM
hmm...reminds me of the neighbor in oggy and the cockroaches!! :D
haha great ears! (both of them)
no crits so far...just compliments

Jordi
08-31-2004, 01:17 PM
Nice "Bunny" man.

good work looks good.

looking for more progress, good luck.

whats the plan for it?!


Jordi.

ErAn-C
09-01-2004, 11:43 AM
Hey.

I'm having few problems with the site containing my pictures....
so, for now, until i'll find something better..
(please recomand me if u know any good and free one)

Here is the wire:

http://img80.exs.cx/img80/912/BunNy023Wire.th.jpg (http://img80.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img80&image=BunNy023Wire.jpg)

And here's the BunNy for now:

http://img77.exs.cx/img77/539/BunNy024.th.jpg (http://img77.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img77&image=BunNy024.jpg)

ErAn-C
09-15-2004, 08:48 AM
Didn't have much time lately to work on him...
He almost finished his modeling stage... soon I'll start texturing him.

http://img25.exs.cx/img25/7289/BunNy026.th.jpg (http://img25.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img25&image=BunNy026.jpg)

Pi3141
09-15-2004, 01:30 PM
I'm in love with your style dude, this bunny rocks.

ErAn-C
09-19-2004, 04:26 PM
Thanx Pi3141, and congratulations on the first page :thumbsup:
I'm working on some textures now.. since i'm no expert in that, i hope it won't take too long, or wouldn't be good at all..
I'll update in a year or so :)
stay around, if you have any advice, it's always welcome.

Self-Designer
09-19-2004, 07:19 PM
Great work man! That's really a good character! What are those thingies on his head (not the small ears, not the big ears, those small thingies like giraffes' horns between the big ears)?

and hi from Israel! :)

ErAn-C
09-22-2004, 06:35 AM
Thanks Artist 3D for ur comment, and hi back :)
well, I don't want his bunny ears to fall... so i've used the help of a couple of nails...:)

and about the textures.. I've started working on it,
here's the start!

http://img51.exs.cx/img51/6746/BunNy031.th.jpg (http://img51.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img51&image=BunNy031.jpg)

Self-Designer
09-22-2004, 10:41 AM
LOL, now i get it. I thought it's just a funny mounster. As if he wants to look frightening, but those small ears and big bunny ears are ruining everything. And I like the very small ears that size! Like a secret joke or an easter egg.

IDownupI
09-22-2004, 12:29 PM
Hahaahaha this isssss soo cute =D

ErAn-C
09-26-2004, 06:30 AM
small update.
finished UV mapping + some coloring for almost the entire upper body.

for now i'm quite happy with the result..
after finishing coloring the entire mesh, i'll start creating some hair,
and fur for the costume...
but that won't happen too soon,
I don't have much spare time for working on him.


http://imageuploading.com/040926/1096192175_tmb.jpg (http://imageuploading.com/040926/1096192175.jpg)

ErAn-C
10-03-2004, 12:02 AM
a few more add-ons...
and i started making some props for the final shot.
(they aren't fully modeled yet)


http://img103.exs.cx/img103/5250/BunNy043.th.jpg (http://img103.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img103&image=BunNy043.jpg)

Human_Vision
10-03-2004, 02:23 PM
Woooooooooooooooooooooooooo .... Great Bunny ..... Man !!!Look a little gay but cute :)

AmirP
10-03-2004, 03:48 PM
Very nice work, Keep it up
The textures look very soft right now, would like to see more detail, hairs and stuff like that.
what about the scene it self, do you have an idea for it ? did you start working on any thing for it, could be a really nice character for a short animation or something like that, could you post a few more images or wires up, i'de like to see your workflow for building volumes

oh and your ears are a bit too small :buttrock:

roli
10-04-2004, 03:23 PM
Looks great, what about some more props?

ErAn-C
10-04-2004, 10:30 PM
Thanks guys.
okay, I will stop working on textures for the mean time..
now I wanna start making the comosition of the shot... so, I'm creating additional props such as -
BunNy's harley davidson!
well... almost..... :
http://img48.exs.cx/img48/3158/041Tricycle001.th.jpg (http://img48.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img48&image=041Tricycle001.jpg)

:)

that also means that i have to select a pose for him.. so i'll create a simple rig for him as well.
it's great talking about all that, but let's hope it won't take a month now :)

BTW - all the props aren't fully modeled yet. I'll change them once i'll have the complete image.

Rodi
10-05-2004, 07:03 AM
Nice Bike ErAn' You know what this Bunny reminds me of? You know Debo from the movie 'Friday' lol.

ErAn-C
01-26-2005, 10:59 PM
Phooo... it's been way too long since i've stoped working on him..
but now i've got some spare time so maybe there will actually be some progress :)


http://img161.exs.cx/img161/1663/BunNy044.th.jpg (http://img161.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img161&image=BunNy044.jpg)

AmirP
01-27-2005, 07:05 AM
Spare time ? are you sure about that :deal:

Its nice to see you keep working on this one, I would really like to see this one evolve, Nice start on the texturing

Keep it up :thumbsup:

Human_Vision
01-29-2005, 03:17 PM
I think the ears are too small ... :shrug:

Matt-Clark
04-06-2006, 04:47 PM
testing testing

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ErAn-C
04-06-2006, 05:35 PM
Finally! :) some spare time.
here's an update. i'll start working on the scene.
http://img333.imageshack.us/img333/5052/bunnyscenev0121id.th.jpg (http://img333.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bunnyscenev0121id.jpg)

ErAn-C
04-09-2006, 09:33 AM
http://img113.imageshack.us/img113/4762/bunnyscenev0222kz.th.jpg (http://img113.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bunnyscenev0222kz.jpg)

ErAn-C
04-11-2006, 07:54 PM
http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/3569/bunnyscenev0285ya.th.jpg (http://img132.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bunnyscenev0285ya.jpg)

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