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jddog

08-25-2004, 10:35 AM

Hello people,

I've posted an image in the gallery and probably was better to post that here... I didn't have crits :sad: and my wish is to have some crits (not the kind 'I like', but more about texture, lights compositions, etc...)

So here the link and some other detail images...
If you have some time, thanks a lot :D ...

jdd

texures made with BodyPaint 2 exept some wears, figure and hair texture.

.| posted image

http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?t=164389

.| View 2

http://www.jddog.ch/cgtalk/jddogtadaoimg2.jpg

.| View 3

http://www.jddog.ch/cgtalk/jddogtadao3.jpg

RickardAx

08-25-2004, 11:20 AM

Hi
I think the lightning is great and the wall texture is great but you can se that it repeats. The only thing i don´t like is the floor, it looks a bit blurry and i think that the image would benefit if it didn´t look so similar to the walls.
Cheers
Rickard

opay

08-25-2004, 12:33 PM

hello jddog,
mmm, i'm not an expert but i agree with rickard,

lighting is great, lovely light :) maybe soft shadow will better than hard shadow

texturing on the floor is too....strange, and texture on the garden, is it plant or anything else,sorry if i'm wrong :)

cloud, mmm, i think u should change this cloud, coz its very strange, i mean i like the blue sky but the white cloud its seems strange

compositing, did u use figure from poser? its nice and perfect

about overall, this is great image, just this image is seem soo cold...its too quiet

=peace=
payz

jddog

08-25-2004, 01:09 PM

Hey thanks for this cris...

he wall texture is great but you can se that it repeats

I think here I need to work more on the randomess design for my concrete, I've recieve different same comment.

the only thing i don´t like is the floor

...good point I will update it...

compositing, did u use figure from poser? its nice and perfect

yes is poser figure, but I tried to do some figure good dressed... :D normally I don't make compositing (I don't like it) becasue a lot of time we will see to much the integration. So using poser I can add in scale a figure.

and texture on the garden, is it plant or anything else,sorry if i'm wrong

The concept is to create a minimal garden... so only water and seaweed... yep is minimal. Updating the floor I think I will change some ideas and put some grass and trees/shrub. I will see, I think about it.

just this image is seem soo cold...its too quiet

This was a wish for this image... eventually I forced a little bit too much... I take notice for the up-date.

:thumbsup:

many thanks for comments...
other C&C always welcome.

jdd

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