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JakeJohnson
08-23-2004, 07:25 PM
Did this in one night. Its not finished yet by no means, I still have to take care of the lighting and some tiling of textures in Photoshop. I just wanted to know what others thought, and if you had any ideas of anything else I could add to it.

http://www.ja-bob.com/Images/Asylum.jpg

JakeJohnson
08-25-2004, 04:56 AM
Ok guys, this is a focused critique. Someone has to see something about it that I can change. Go ahead rip it apart, I am a big boy I can handle it.

Stardave
08-25-2004, 09:23 AM
hey

nice image, especially textures. but i would work on the upper walls and ceiling. its a bit repetative
and some vulemetric lightning would really help the athmosphere imo

mattpegg
08-27-2004, 06:13 AM
Hey 3dmax...

nice concept.

For me the image needs a point of focus... something to draw the viewer into
the image. At the moment all I see is an old bed which doesn't seem to be enough
to hold my attention.

Also, I think the image would be improved by moving the camera closer to the bed..
at the moment most of the image is the floor which doesn't have much going for in terms of interest.

I guess what I'm saying is, you've created an environment... now it needs a story to go with it.

cheers,
m@t

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