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Orona
08-22-2004, 01:57 PM
http://www.geocities.com/oren_adamovich/Animation/Crickets.mpg

RaoUUUL
08-23-2004, 02:19 PM
animation is minimal but decent. the leaf animates ok and so does the insect. ill address the composition, it doesnt make much sense to have him fly from left to right then left to right again. have him fly from right to left then left to right..know what i mean? and when he laughs at the camera i think his head should get alot closer to the camera like he is laughing in your face. it looks like you are done so those minor things would help out.

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