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Mirandinha 08-21-2004, 04:43 PM Hello fellas :) I've posted this on the general wip forum twice ( once when it was just a head, and the second time when the body was linked with it), only to be ignored on both attempts. Still, I'd like some critiques, and since it is all wings, I thought: what the hell, let's get ignored a third time!
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v388/VolcanicViper/FullBodyPerspective4.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v388/VolcanicViper/FullBodyPerspective3.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v388/VolcanicViper/FullBodyPerspective2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v388/VolcanicViper/FullBodyPerspective.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v388/VolcanicViper/Collage3.jpg
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aragorn
08-22-2004, 04:42 PM
nicely done. this is a good rough model. the proportions might be a little off by a bit. but this is a great start. keep it up. i await your progress,
J.K.Makowka
08-22-2004, 05:05 PM
Good work, but two things:
1. Erase all you memory about that danger girl reference if you want to make a realistic body (this applies mostly to the lower body), but as a dangergirl type of model it is really well done, but doesn't fit very well to the more realistic head.
2. Lose the smile on the face. It makes her look retarded, seriously!
It is not a good idea anyways to model facial exspressions into the base mesh... you can use blendshapes for that later on. Oh and the back of her jaw seems to be overly "pronounced" for a female.
P.S.: Those bags under her eyes arn't very beautiful either, but not unrealistic.
Mirandinha
08-30-2004, 04:06 AM
Thanks for the comments, here's an update :)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v388/VolcanicViper/Half.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v388/VolcanicViper/collageagain.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v388/VolcanicViper/feetcopy.jpg
FonteBoa
08-31-2004, 12:29 AM
only to be ignored on both attemptsOh, my friend! How can you say this!!! You have post it at www.Wings3d.com.br (http://www.wings3d.com.br/) and a lot of comments were posted!! You were not ignored, Viper!!! :eek:
Excelente work, but i think something is wrong at chest
and i miss more defined muscle shapes: the flesh creature is too clean and homogen!
Go on but dont lie to the people hahahaha :scream:
Mirandinha
08-31-2004, 04:28 AM
Hi Fonte :)
I think you misunderstood me :surprised What I said was that I posted this twice in the general wip section of this forum, Cgtalk, and was ignored twice here, not on wings3d.com.br, ok! :thumbsup:
I explained it better back in your forum... See ya back there ok? :wavey:
VolcanicViper/Miranda/Mirandinha, the CG-Schizophrenic :shrug:
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FonteBoa
08-31-2004, 12:21 PM
Volcanic, it was only a joke, my friend! In no time, i really wished to attack you or your
work! You are a great artist, in my opinion, and a very estimated user at www.wings3d.com.br/forum (http://www.wings3d.com.br/forum), and a excelent modeler. It was a misunderstood:
excuse me the inadequate words. I tried to be funny to you: i hope you dont
think anything different (i'll edit right now the anterior post to avoid ruge interpretations...)
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