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Michicu
08-20-2004, 10:12 PM
hello every one!... i'm still working on her ( she's gonna be holding a gun, i'm still workiong on that too, so use your imagination :) ) i'd love some critiques on her so far.
> btw. yep it's photoshop <
ryanx0r
08-20-2004, 10:51 PM
strange positioning, should've had her pointing the gun towards the person viewing the picture, or down by her side or something...i guess it depends on what you put in the background, looks pretty good though :)
peppe27
08-20-2004, 10:58 PM
Actualy realy nice, where in south florida are you, we can compare drawings!!!
Michicu
08-20-2004, 11:31 PM
sorry... it's not a gun she's holding... its a rifle. she's gonna hold it up at an angle.
Michicu
08-20-2004, 11:33 PM
I live in Plantaion/Sunrise...do you know where that is?:shrug:
(and right now, im in Kendall)
peppe27
08-20-2004, 11:48 PM
Iam in deerfield beach
Michicu
08-21-2004, 01:18 AM
ok, i just put the rifle in real quick so you can get a better idea...it isnt placed proberly yet.
FlexGiddy
08-21-2004, 01:45 AM
I like it so far. Have you thought of what the background will be? The only thing I would say would be to take you shadows a little further. (darker) But other than that doing great can't wait to see more.

Ed
Michicu
08-21-2004, 02:01 AM
:shrug:actually... i dont really know what to do for a BG yet... i'll take suggestions tho
captain chapo
08-21-2004, 02:51 AM
oh my that's sweet. the only thing i might try and change is the curvature of her far leg...looks kinda strange near the knee. post some more!
tevih
08-22-2004, 03:34 PM
From Hollywood!

Fingers by the gun barrel are not makin sense.. though you did say the rifle wasn't placed properly... And as far as BG, well, i have a wierd imagination - I was thinking a pink and frilly teenager's bedroom with stuffed dolls and yello and pink and lace all over...like, the girl is sitting on her bed, with a canopy on it... :)
FlexGiddy
08-23-2004, 02:13 AM
I was kind thinking the same thing tevih.

Ed
Michicu
08-23-2004, 01:12 PM
i'm sorry, but were you thinking the same thing about the fingers or about the BG?
(btw...let me explain the gun thing -and give credit were credit is due-)
the gun was made by some one else - Chris Childress- (he's my ex :sad: ) and i made the girl...
so they are on diff. layers... i havnt actually put the rifle and her hand in place soo its all messed up (notice the floating fingers :D )
i just wanted you guys to be able to see the rifle too so i popped it in.
FlexGiddy
08-24-2004, 04:10 PM
The bg is what I was talking about. As far as the gun.. well you've already said that you just slapped it in there so I'll leave it at that.
LuWeeWu
08-24-2004, 07:51 PM
I was thinkin that it might be cool to have her sittin on a jeep or something with a jungle in the background. Maybe like its up on a plateu over looking the tree tops of the jungle.

just an idea

Great work by the way!
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