Character_Female Soldier

[dassbaba]

that is way elite, reminds me of unreal tournament

[AndyH]

Looks good, but its hard to see whats going on cos of your dark renders. Stick a lighter background and some ambient light in the scene. From what i can see it looks well modelled, but the lack of hard edges / smoothing groups really let it down. Get em sorted!

[franklyn]

the model is looking alrite so far .
but the texturing lacks detail . im asuming shes wearing a metal armor..which needs to have plates and scratches..discoloration..weathering etc etc.

the camo uniform also need to have a cloth texture and is not just made up off a pattern.

[Tree Of Woe]

I'm liking it. Its different from the normal gaming chic that has T&A hanging out all over. And its different from the super battle armor getup like in unreal and quake. She is still looking good with out it being in your face. Lets see a wireframe. Keep up the good work. Lets see that sniper rifle textured up.

Tree Of Woe

[franklyn]

it might be a bit creative but it sure does lack appeal.
the textures seem to boring and bland ..i dont see any highlights just some shades.
i hope the final is better textured.

dont give up hope

[the_zed_axis]

render it with a lighter background

would love to see some wireframe shots
good job by the way
hope you can give her some animations

[dtrimble]

Hey quick crit for you,

The front plane of the face is too far forward, basicly the distance between the ear to the cheek looks long, bring the whole front plane of the face back.
The sternum is a little sunken(center, her breast armor)
The legs are spaced too far apart, and look kinda odd. Work the front view and make them have more a curved shape.
Suggestions:
Bring out more of the mech/wire details in her armor.
Consider using an opacity map for the hair strands.

The details on the beltpacks and gun look good. Overal it looks cool so far, finish it!

[TimTheEnchanter]

Thanks for the help and critiques guys ... heres a render with no lights on and a couple wireframes ....again thanks http://www.wayimages.com/data/165/1093119588snoddy_nolights.jpghttp://www.wayimages.com/data/165/1093119589snoddy_wire1.jpg
http://www.wayimages.com/data/165/1093119590snoddy_wire2.jpg

[Pilgrim Zero]

Good stuff. I like the hair on her. Maybe tone down the blue on the armor a bit and make her armor a bit more damaged or worn.

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