Characters----Monster Jerry~

[eFDay]

Very strange an well done , i like it a lot.You should perhaps work a little more on the integration of the eyes in the face.Just my opinion.

[wonder]

I agree with your option, Thanx a lot! I will rework and update when I finally finish it.
more advice before I modify it ,please?:D

[dosadi]

Hey,
Neat idea overall.. You may want to turn down your bump maps a bit. The one on the face doesn't seem to mimic actual skin very well. Try adding wrinkles and such, there are a little around one of teeth, but those would probably be more pronounced and would be better modelled with geometry. I like the teeth except for for the one on the far right that seems to be growing out of the skin as opposed to the mouth. Once again cool idea, and I like the "peach-fuzz" fur.

[RobinOberg]

very nice for a scanline render...

i have to agree that the eyes doesnt seem to fit into the face...

[Rhid1en]

I too agree with the other critiques. Very creative and interesting character though! I think the nose area could use a little more definition and a slight lip seem from the nose to the corners of the mouth would add a little more character and detail to him too. I also think you should add small ear holes between the two extrusions; kind of like a lizards ears!

[wonder]

Thank guys for reply and your very useful advice! I will improve it again this night~~~ I hope you will see a much better one this night!
Forgive my poor english.

[wonder]

I improved the texture..........
http://218.76.39.7/bbs/attachments/200208/07020759.jpg

[levius]

I like it, very original, when are you going to post new version?
I think that the place where is nose conected to face should be more sharp too.

Looking forward to see more :thumbsup:

[damon579]

my God that is scary :eek:

[Aura]

awful man!

[wonder]

Thank guys for reply~

levius:
Thanx, I won't make a new version, This is just a practice~
I am working on a hero of Chinese myth --- Sun Wu Kong .

damon579:
He looks a bit strang,~ but he looks lovely for me~

Aura
You are Chinese right? I have seen your post on ChinaDV~

[derwolpertinger]

hey wonder-really good modelling there!:thumbsup: but i think the textures still need some work to make it damnsupergood. the bump on the skin texture is still too harsh and too random as i think. try to add some wrinkles to areas in the face where the human gets some wrinkles when he becomes older. and are you using a specular map? if not, that would add some extra realisism to it for sure. another thing is that the teeth look to clean to me compared to the skin. make them a bit dirty and also increase the specular on them. hope i could help a bit. :D

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