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08-12-2004, 03:21 PM
The drawing has been made in the subway so line are not vey clear, i use photoshop to colorised it :) All critiques are welcome!
08-12-2004, 04:33 PM
I realy like the overall style and colors. Good job on the clothes.
But it's not clear what's up with the guy. Is he scared, running away? The way he holds his arms/hands looks rather ... well, neither masculine nor skillfull.
08-12-2004, 04:51 PM
I will have to agree with thorwil that its difficult to figure out what is happening. His lower hand seems to be akwardly drawn, more cartoonish than the rest of the body. I would also stay away from using a black outline so much. The body (face, hands, hair) should be more like the pants, more blending less lines. However I love your style, shading is awsome and the color sceme makes everything seem to blend in perfectly.
08-13-2004, 08:45 AM
thanks for your comments ;)
Yes i think that i must define better the background on my pictures and for blackoutline i'm agree with you i will try to approach more traditionnal painting for the next!
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