CGTalk - its worth it-short

dosealas

08-10-2004, 10:39 PM

this is an short film i wrote,i played, animated, directed, edited and got tired... it started as a fun hobby,and why dont we do it..it was done with no bugdet,and all the animation was done by me..since there was no budget the quality of the animation was set at a middle level..the goal of this film was to was to watch it :)

i hope it puts a smile..dont look for high quality cg:)

professional work is worth working on, amateur is a treat:)enjoy..do u think it would be worth to re-produce it in a higher quality session.

Link (www.tumgorsel.com/dosealas/dosevcd.mpg)

Projectkmo

08-10-2004, 11:07 PM

I'm surprised no one has responded yet, that was a prety clever Idea and I think, well executed. Personally though...I would have made it a nice cold Beer....rather than some shades.

Grats on a nice short!

pasghetti

08-12-2004, 01:42 AM

Hey, that was nicely done. Nice pacing, well framed, very creative. High-five!

don

dosealas

08-13-2004, 01:43 AM

thanx huyz...:)

i am also surprised there r no comments...

hey is there a crowd out there? no comments anybody?

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wireFrame

08-13-2004, 02:33 AM

Hi!

I like your short movie overall :thumbsup:. However,since you're fishing for more comments, I'll give you some.

1. There are jarring portions that needs additional frames in between. One example is when the group was in slowmotion and then you cut to the boss already sitting on the reclining chair. Some POV shots could enhance the movie as well.

2. Consistency, I find the sky on the dish antenna shot too saturated compared to the overall-cloudy sky appearance of the shot.

3. I don't like the font you used on the all the LCDs (too contemporary). Used something more modern and hitech.

4. The Satellite is quite dark (lacks highligths too). The rocket exhaust/heatwave looks way too glassy. Some smokes needs a bit of work.

Most of other comments are rather personal nitpicking.

Overall, it's a nice short. How about making another one?:applause:

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