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IvanDazkov
08-10-2004, 10:01 AM
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Title: Small Bolt In The Big Mechanism
Name: Ivan_dazkov
Country: Russia
Software: 3d Max




The world of the little girl which was brought down with the lorry. Covered with various mechanisms. About which all have forgotten.......

Render plugin Brasil

IvanDazkov
08-12-2004, 04:20 AM
PLease comments... ?!
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darth
08-12-2004, 06:39 AM
Hey I like it. I really like the render and the style of the piece. Just wondering about the depth of field, the cog with the clock is to strong and sharp. Especially on the back of this where it comes into the frame. The main focal point I assume is the character but becasue of the sharp clock it makes the image seem less balanced, maybe blur it a bit more. Otherwise its looking real nice.

IvanDazkov
08-12-2004, 11:18 AM
On more constructive criticism :rolleyes: ...

Guillermo
08-12-2004, 03:26 PM
Agree with darth.

And thatīs constructive ;)

BartokDesign
08-12-2004, 05:24 PM
I think the idea is great , and the executin is good .
But the shadows and lightning could be better .
and that is a constructive also. :scream:

dcmoutinho
08-13-2004, 02:12 PM
very nice,:thumbsup:
but, I also think the illumination could be better...:shrug:

IvanDazkov
08-29-2004, 05:58 AM
a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a:sad:

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