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08-04-2004, 04:42 AM
A for fun project for mine. Crit away. :)
08-04-2004, 10:07 AM
That's one crazy-ass looking monkey.
Good job. :thumbsup:
08-04-2004, 12:17 PM
Yeah,it's a funny thing!
It looks pretty good, especially the facial expressions. Yet I feel that your textures still lack in some detail. Add some wrinkles and put more highlights.
08-05-2004, 04:02 PM
i like it. :)
What is the polycount and can we see the wire?
08-05-2004, 04:31 PM
Cute Monkey. IMO he could use a little bump mapping. And the hair looks awesome, but you can fade the ends a little more in your alpha map...That drunk monkey reminds me of a character I saw in a movie once. I do agree with wrinkles and stuff like that.
08-05-2004, 07:36 PM
hey man. pretty good job you've got going on there :)
i'm a tad buisy so the only things i'll crit at the moment are.....
the first pose is aweful. get reference, loosen him up.
the smile doesn't look like a smile. raise the corners of the mouth more, push up the cheeks, and squink the eyes a tad. for a cartoony look, raise teh bottom eyelids a fair bit.
good work. keep at 'er
08-05-2004, 07:57 PM
I would like to see the drunk monkey more, the expression says it all. It would be interesting to see after giving the face more texture. Please post updates. Great monkey pose.
08-05-2004, 10:13 PM
Heres the wire you asked for. It weighs in at 2408 polys.
John, yea that first pose is pretty ugly. I'll have to do something about it.
And for the people saying I should add wrinkles and more details, yea I probably should, I just need to figure out where to put em.
Thanks for all the crits and comments guys :)
08-06-2004, 12:43 AM
can I/we see just bones?
01-18-2006, 10:00 PM
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