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Killerbee2
08-01-2002, 06:28 PM
Gonna leave it like this. Only thing left is add some text. A shame really because i like it like this. It's meant to be a poster for a party.

Here ya go:

http://www.urbanx.be/max/cyberia.jpg
Flypaper
08-01-2002, 06:39 PM
That's great man! Really great!:applause: :applause: :applause: :applause: :applause:
Killerbee2
08-02-2002, 03:11 PM
tnx flypaper. No one has other remarks.
Please don't be gentle. - :shame:

Some flaws i discovered myself (mostly on the model)

- the hands need to be redone
- something to add in the background to explain where the bombs are coming from

so give me yur best shot. Hard critz please (but argumented)
I want this to become the best poster i ever made so far.
A MacVey
08-02-2002, 04:11 PM
thats a very nice model!
Savage_Henry
08-02-2002, 04:53 PM
I think the poster looks good...but since your looking for "Hard" critiques....

I think the balckened area in the lower-left corner is a bit distracting, its too big.

The robots pose is a little weak. A staggered gait and raising of the elbows would give him a more commanding presence.

Light the robots legs a little better. You spent alot of time modeling/ texturing them...show them off!!

Maybe try opening one of the hands as well...got for dynamic..don't close everything off.

I like what you have so far...the background tells me you've got a good handle on photoshop....so you probably could try to add a little something more to the texture as well...Keep it going...it's looking great
Killerbee2
08-02-2002, 05:15 PM
that's what i call a crit :bounce:

Gonna work more on the robot :
- correct the hands (model and pose)
- adjust the pose
- give'm a subtle texture (maybe adding some logo on the chest, bit dirtying things up)

I was also thinking of adding a kind of battlefield shadow into the background (could explain where the bombs are coming from) kinda terminator (the arcade game) style.

Afterwards i still have to add text on the poster so the balckened area in the lower-left corner is more like a layout thingy to support the text.

Any other flaws ?
HapZungLam
08-02-2002, 05:55 PM
i like the background and the lighting. :thumbsup:
Firebat_2000
08-02-2002, 06:42 PM
looks nice..mostly
the hands as you already know look not all that great.for some reason they don't look very,ahem, how to put it, well volumetric..
they should be more solid i think.play a bit with some highlights on them, it should help
also, the rockets' exhaust is almost invisible.i'd make it bigger and hotter ;-)
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