Environement : REincarnator

[funnydoodle]

just a brief description about the pic. the pods are reincarnating pods containing the spirits which is undergoing the reincarnation process.

[WarpedMinds]

I really like this, the transparency on the pods is quite good. There is just something about the yellow atmosphere that bugs me, I would prefer it as a dark red/purple, kinda like out of the matrix, or even a dark cave feeling.

Change the background and it would be much better :)

[davedavidson]

well u have a nice concept there and at first i liked the pic but
it doesnt show wat it is enough for my liking, they look like pods in some ways but the scale of them isnt clear to me

it could almost be a part of a small machine if u get wat i mean
maybe adding something that i could relate to ie a user interface or something so it gives the unit scale.


does that make sense, i know wat i mean but do u
:)


:bounce:

[funnydoodle]

Originally posted by _dd
well u have a nice concept there and at first i liked the pic but
it doesnt show wat it is enough for my liking, they look like pods in some ways but the scale of them isnt clear to me

it could almost be a part of a small machine if u get wat i mean
maybe adding something that i could relate to ie a user interface or something so it gives the unit scale.


does that make sense, i know wat i mean but do u
:)


:bounce:

well indeed it's just a part of a BIG machine. but the whole machine doesn't look good. this is the best view i could get, but i can post some more pics hang on... just to give u a better view ...

[funnydoodle]

here u go.... do u think a wireframe helps?

[edmundw]

hey... cool stuff... way to go...

[wuwu]

Walauyeh...cool man but y aliens again?! hohoho

[Yiorgz]

The second post is better. Now we can see maybe how big this thing might be. The sky fits better with the image now.

I can see some visible stepping on the disc at the front bottom right side of the picture. Maybe it needs more polygons there to smooth it out.

[R3Dmachin3]

i love this.......



but it can more better then this:beer:





:cool: Be Cool

[prasa]

Pipes!! More Pipes!!

REincarnators usualy has a huge quantity of pipes ;)

[funnydoodle]

Originally posted by prasa
Pipes!! More Pipes!!

REincarnators usualy has a huge quantity of pipes ;)

usually? well, i prefer to see things in a different point of view... let's not stick to the stereotypes shall we?

[sepehr]

Hey Man!
I like this very much.
Keep it up.
:applause:

[alvisgan]

wei!!!:bounce: G O O D J O B !!!:shame: NICE LOOK WOR.........KAMBATEY:thumbsup:
BU KI TIAO BANG KU BANG KU ANG KI KI

[JerryB]

I think everything looks a little too plastic - perhaps something to do with the surface values.

[RobinOberg]

i love the design, and the rendering.

[wmendez]

nice work!!:thumbsup:

[drew]

Very nice.

[Firebat_2000]

well, it looks good, but i find the surfaces too perfect.i mean, there are always some spots, scratches, even dirt and dents and so on.If you add some subtle bump map, you'll get rid of the plastic feel i think.Some specular and glossiness maps would help too, but be subtle with those too ...
other than that, it's good
another think that bugs me is that the reincarnator is too small, that is, it occupies just one 4rth of the screen.maybe you should try changing the camera angle and stuff

[sepehr]

That Depth of field blur has make the first pic perfect.
Don't change it.:thumbsup:

[sanhueza]

I love the concept and visually it is overall appealing. Very good lighting. It somehow seems a little unfinished (but then again, most 3D art is) Maybe some more surfacing like has been suggested, or ornate details on the device and its surroundings, but it really is a great picture as is.

An animated camera fly through would be great to see, especially if you had the organic dangling parts pulsating like organs, using morph targets. Creeeeeeeeepy....

- Me

www.sanhueza.com

[NerdUp]

I think the DOF is the main culprit in making the first picture give an impression of smallness. The second picture gave a much better sense of scale.

[knight_2k]

OK well Great Work so far.. Need to increase the tesselation on the surfaces of the glass I can see the facets and they don't look like they should have any :shame: ..(the round discs that everything is sitting on..) also from the first post the metal or glass pannel above the REincinorator needs alitle more detail I can't quite makeout it's material, and I think I should atleast have a sense of what it's surface quality is... Other than that.. it looks great.. nice concept..

:thumbsup:

[funnydoodle]

uhm.... thanx for all the replies, c & cs. i realise a lot of those weaknesses in my work earlier b4 i posted it. maybe i'm still new to this when i was doing it. i remember it was only the 4th month since i started learning 3D when i did this. Still have much to learn but hey, i will post more pics of my work as time passes and let y'all comment bout it. thanx!

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