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kryoboy
07-28-2004, 06:23 PM
hey all, heres my current project. im seeking crits. and suggestions on the following especially please comment what you think for the following atleast.

nicknaks and doodads what and where any ideas?
armor texture and color scheme.
weapon of some nature that will fit her armor style.

Also looking for white lion refrences. I wish to model an oversized white lion with sadel for her, to make 2 scenes a still of her laying back against the cheek of the lion with her arm proped up on the lions nose, the lion is resting with head down on floor. mouth of lion will be from her waist to her underarm in size, to help you picture the size of this protective and friendly beast.

http://www.ona1r.com/jason/k.jpg

kryoboy
07-29-2004, 04:13 AM
update on her armor, some better texturing and trim shading. tying things togeater here now.
http://www.ona1r.com/jason/armor.jpg

kryoboy
07-29-2004, 12:06 PM
i know crappy final gathering.. its only at 20 =P not a beauty render here just to give you the idea.

http://www.ona1r.com/jason/new.jpg

blaize
07-31-2004, 09:25 PM
first: dont write on the pics, please !!! :cry:
i can barely read what's going on, use MS paint or something and just type it on there :P

well the proportions look good ( is it Aneta from 3d.sk ? :) )
and i really like the gloves fabric and shape. ( ok i Love it )

the face is a bit lacking though, the eyes are a bit to high i think, and maybe a bit small ( unless the female is asian )
i would move her whole face down a bit since the chin looks a bit big to.

so, move the eyes, nose, mouth down a bit, and the face will looks much beter.
( ps fix the ear a bit, the "oorlel" ( the hanging thingy:P ) is to big/fat.

other then that no critz, skin looks good, armor looks superb.
it's great, keep it up :thumbsup:

kryoboy
08-01-2004, 11:02 AM
thanks bliaze yes that is aneta from 3d.sk lol.. how did you know. the face was based from asian but i agree i didnt like the face perportions really here is a big update.

http://www.ona1r.com/jason/ballpark.jpg

ill post a closer shot of face in a few. i have more tweaking to do. thanks for the comments.

blaize
08-01-2004, 11:37 AM
how did i know ?, wel we all love aneta right :D
and i'm working on a female body myself which is based on aneta :love:

skin color is much beter, the previous was just to pink.
damn i just cant get over the fact that i just Love the armor ^_^

another thing that wrong whith the face is that the eyes are to high.
i found a pic that might help you, it might not be asain but i doubt that the proportions have much difference.

http://www.fineart.sk/photos/loomis_heads/107.JPG

i think that pic will help you allot to get the position of the mouth and eyes correct.
keep updating ^_^

BTW: love the "panties" but isnt the rope between the toes has to go between the big toe ?

- blaize

kryoboy
08-02-2004, 12:23 AM
some go between the 2 toes, and some between the bigtoe. Ill put though big toe, it should look better anyway. thanx for the crits and the image. :thumbsup:

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