Streetfighter Alpha sequentials

[alchoi]

Not bad at all ...

You have some skills ...

Here are a few pointers ... stay rough and stay loose ... use LOTS of construction lines and geometric breakdowns ... this will really help you work your compositions and posing ... avoid doing your clean up line work for as long as possible ... you'll find that you can really push poses, alter panel layouts, etc .. a lot easier ...

Also ... watch that camera axis line and be careful when you jump across it ... if you don't know what the camera axis line is, have a look at some cinematography books and whatnot. This is EXTREMELY important because it's soo easy to lose your audience.

And lastly, in regards to your posing, try to avoid symmetry as much as possible ... throw one shoulder up, one shoulder down, lean a character towards camera and another away from camera, raise one eyebrow slightly ... I'm generalizing here, but it'll help you push your poses and create really dramatic panels.

But in all ... some good stuff man ...

Al.

[Rtv]

Generalizing? No you're fukkin helping me man.
Finally have some tips, cuz i was very insecure about the pages myself.
Maybe i was too focused on my backgrounds

Thanx alot.:scream:

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