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Damian Max3d.pl
07-24-2004, 02:21 PM
hey! I'am new here, til now I was only "reading", today I'd like to show You something... ;)

I've been working with this scene since may 04, it is some kind of "antistress terapy" :)
it is not an comercial work, I've done it just for fun.
It shows comletely imaginated navy battle, jappanise airstrike on USS ESSEX WWII aircraft carrier. Real one was hited by the kamikadze, I have no bloody idea what was after.
my scene is completely non realistic, and doesnt shows historical event. jus a picture of carrier with few F4u corsairs in the air (there is also a "zero" far away), all was ment to look like cover of model kit set, or something similar. highly "candy looking", - my english is average, sorry about this..

scene was created with 3ds max 6, rendered in Vray in few steps (joined together in photoshop), it is important that whole scene is 100% 3D, there is no brush work on it, just a final color / contrast etc, corection. smoke - I've created it with particles, simple "geospheres" with attashed "noise" modyficator on it, and material with "fallof" in opacity slot. and procedural smoke, copied to the bump slot, and seted up to 80%. water - this is a simple (mesh edited) plane with "vray displace" attashed on it. + highly coplicated material.
foam - on the surface of the water, and water explosions are siple painted textures on simple planes, same as the far "flaks" expolsions.

people on deck, are "bipeds" with colored parts :)
here are few "making of" images, and final render of course:) (final image was rendered in 4k, this is small version of it:))

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http://www.avantgarde.lo.pl/images/AIRwire.jpg
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http://www.avantgarde.lo.pl/images/AIR.jpg
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http://www.avantgarde.lo.pl/images/essex.jpg

Damian Max3d.pl
07-24-2004, 02:24 PM
hmmm...

http://www.avantgarde.lo.pl/images/modeling.jpg
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http://www.avantgarde.lo.pl/images/wire00.jpg
---- and final image:
http://www.avantgarde.lo.pl/images/ESSEXfinall.jpg

once again, sorry about my english....

BgDM
07-24-2004, 02:31 PM
Wicked! I love the final image. Any chance of a larger render so we can see it better?

BgDM

Gremlin
07-24-2004, 02:35 PM
wow, totally sick...
great modeling and executing, but nice composition overall... it looks like a piece of art and not just some models slapped together.

Damian Max3d.pl
07-24-2004, 02:45 PM
hi res version... sorry but I dont have Hi res version with finished color corection, at the moment....

2000 pix--- http://www.avantgarde.lo.pl/images/2000pix.jpg

thx for coments! :):):)

kaffo
07-24-2004, 04:39 PM
wohooo... nice scene! i love the final image, its really dramatic!

ambas
07-24-2004, 04:43 PM
Whhoooa!! that final image is fantastic!

Napa!m
07-24-2004, 04:59 PM
Incredible work :)

The Vought Corsair plane is the best! ;)

kevjon
07-25-2004, 02:20 AM
Great work Damien, it looks great.:thumbsup:

I particularily like the textures on your Corsair. Very realistic ! It looks like its been out in the pacific sun and also in a war.

My only crit would be that you have some definite shape problems with the corsair. The cowling on the F4U-1D which was used at this point in the war had a completely circular cowling. Your cowling is too oval looking and looks closer to a P47 Thunderbolts shape.

The engine supercharger intakes in the wing leading edges are also a little inaccurate and could use a tad refinement and the gun ports should be closer to the leading edge of the wing, whereas yours appear to be on top of the wing.

The final image looks awesome. Hard to believe its 3D !

Keep up the good work !

klumzygerl
07-25-2004, 04:02 AM
Wow, that is the most amazing war scene i've ever seen! It is so realistic, and looks like a photo. The plane's colours a beautiful and your textures are nicely done.I like that you make them look like a real plane by creating obvious imprefections like the patches.

The ship is very awesome. So much detail went into it - it is very real.

I like the upside-down plane in the foreground. It adds a nice touch.

Cheers :thumbsup:

geran__m
07-25-2004, 07:28 AM
Amazing work. It looks great.

nicolasambrosio
07-25-2004, 09:39 AM
splendid work, I like the colors and general environment:thumbsup:

Byte
07-25-2004, 10:30 AM
Woow :eek: great work!

Michas
07-25-2004, 10:41 AM
Awesome bro :) I've seen it before already. No crits :) Pure gold

Grin3d
07-25-2004, 12:03 PM
Great Work, i love it. You've got pretty good sense for dramatic design.

Guybrush
07-25-2004, 01:47 PM
really amazing work, nice to see such a good war composition...5 stars

Damian Max3d.pl
07-25-2004, 01:49 PM
Thx!!!! :):):):):):):)

jairaj
07-25-2004, 07:52 PM
Good work dude :thumbsup:

Guillermo
07-26-2004, 07:28 AM
Simply AMAZING! :thumbsup:

HuiTian
07-26-2004, 08:44 AM
the final image is amazing!

AcidX
07-26-2004, 12:27 PM
Absolute Awesome Work m8!!

I really like the lighting of the scene, the overall scene is very emotional, really really well done!!

5 stars

RhyderKey
07-26-2004, 01:35 PM
sweet

how did u do that water????
plug-in??

superlayer
07-26-2004, 01:35 PM
it looks great.
You should make some highres renders.

[Ace]
07-26-2004, 01:36 PM
Damn, looks very good, the final composition opened my eyes (and mouth). Well done ! I had an instant Pearl Harbor movies flash ;)

If I have to comment on it, probalby just little gibberish : Water look great, except from the spot where (the sun?) highlights, the only place where the material looks less "water" than other places. I'm not shure of the plane that's upside down, looks slightly over the top and I'm not really shure about it's lightening either. People on the battleship look a bit too confy, I guess when a ship balances like that, I wouldn't be of for a walk, or I would be flying. :D

Just details....
But really great anyway, very cinematic, hope to see more of your stuff, stars earned here ! ;)

playmesumch00ns
07-26-2004, 02:14 PM
Nice image
You could use some more foam caps on the waves

and the corsair in the foreground needs motion blur.

corrupto
07-26-2004, 06:04 PM
:arteest: "SUPER RADICAL"

Michas
07-26-2004, 10:50 PM
5 star from me bro. It should take place in CG Choice Gallery ;)

questionmark
07-27-2004, 04:07 AM
:eek: :twisted: :buttrock: :bounce:

WOW!!! really awesom still ! Thanks for showing the wires you flooded my brain with things to try...
WOW a second time !

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