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genioloko
07-20-2004, 07:50 PM
Hi! This is my last work. I'll animate soon. C&C are welcome. thank!

http://anigon.wanadooadsl.net/images/petirrojo.jpg

genioloko
07-20-2004, 07:52 PM
some screeshots

http://anigon.wanadooadsl.net/images/petirrojoWire1.jpg

genioloko
07-20-2004, 07:53 PM
other screenshot

http://anigon.wanadooadsl.net/images/petirrojoWire2.jpg

gent_k
07-20-2004, 08:41 PM
It looks nice.

There's something weird about the legs.
The leaves look really good. You've done a good job matching the background.

BESTrin
07-20-2004, 08:54 PM
The enviroment and lighting are top quality but the bird model (and texture) could use allightle help. Maybe its the pose because the feet look good in the wire but the look unnatural in th image an the bird is allightle fat but with a hard feeling. Like if i tapped his stomack it would sound like hard plastic. Also the tail goes right along the tree branch so if you dont llook carefully it looks like the branch is coming out its but. The feathers lower down should also be longer. Good work though just a few things and it will b great.

calzoncillos
07-21-2004, 07:36 AM
Hey, David! :D Very cool model! As always, the lighting rocks! I like the composition too, and the way it's been combined with a picture. Very good. :) I think the bird is very good too. Maybe it's not the most realistic bird ever created by man, but it's almost there. ;)

Anyway, keep it up, and hope to see it animated soon!! :)

genioloko
07-21-2004, 06:48 PM
hi! Thanks for your comments. usefull has always. All you are in right with your comments and i'll try to get better for next renders :D

genioloko
07-21-2004, 06:50 PM
ese pablo!!! así me gusta... sin abandonar las buenas costumbres de postear. gracias tio!! Aver si nos vemos en septiembre (yo ya estoy apunto de irme a mallorca) :)

neozenit
07-22-2004, 06:08 AM
hola, muy bueno ese petirojo, aunque me gusta mas el entorno que el pajaro, pero la imagen global es la leche, un excellent para ti :thumbsup: :applause:

por cierto como leches se ponen los avatares, llevo un mes registrado y todavia no lo he consegido :shrug:

genioloko
07-22-2004, 08:53 AM
gracias! tienes q tener un minimo de 25 posts creo. Entonces luego en tu perfil te permiten ponerte un avatar :) (yo me pase unos días posteando hasta llegar a los 25 :P je je! )

neozenit
07-22-2004, 12:08 PM
gracias, voy a segir al pie de la letra tu sugerencia :)

Dietmar
07-22-2004, 12:28 PM
Nice work!!
The two hotspots in the eye of your bird look a little bit strange to me.

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