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bob
12-16-2001, 06:30 PM
Hi,

i'm new to this board,

my names bob Iíve been studying 3d animation for the past year, Iíve just finished up my demoreelÖ

http://www.3dluvr.com/byrne/2001_demoreel/reel_divx.avi (12 meg)

pull it apart tell me whats wrong (in a constructive way :)) with it so i can fix it before it's sent out to studios

thanks


Bob

nick
12-16-2001, 10:08 PM
I think your link is broken, or the server is down! Its not downloading!

bob
12-16-2001, 11:36 PM
thanks for pointing that out... it's fixed now.

Taoizm
12-17-2001, 04:16 AM
I like it. Starts off really cool. I also liked the fact that you showed some WIP work in there, but I might suggest also showing a mesh to go with it. (Since it shows your work process) The audio at the very end (old man singing) is way too low in comparison to the rest of the piece. Also his motion looks to erratic, and to me he feels as though he's about to fall over. He's not using the cane for any type of support at all. Well, there's my $.02 (and I want change) :D

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