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07-13-2004, 04:34 PM
07-13-2004, 04:35 PM
kick war 2004
07-13-2004, 04:38 PM
that is all~Do you like~?
07-13-2004, 04:49 PM
well I'm not much for anime so I'll focus on whats good. Your line work is excellent and the body's are pretty much proportionally correct. I'm not too fond of the girl with the scythe. I've never liked drawings of people who carry weapons that would be impossible for them to actually hold. But hey, who knows, maybe shes an android or something and I'm just talking out of my ass :)
Anyway, like I said I really like your line work and composision on the second two. I especially like the third one because you didn't fall into the anime trap of making her breasts huge and magically perky. Although I'm not entirely sure what it is she's holding. A hooka perhaps?
07-13-2004, 05:08 PM
thanks~In fact,the girl is a robot in the first Painting~i things the world when do this air,robots must have a Azrael,and this one do not like Mankind's Azrael,her body make from Steel and power from Electricity~~ :bounce:
i can use word in english a little~ sorry.:P
07-13-2004, 05:22 PM
I love these pictures. Very sophisticated looking inks and your characters have lots of personality. Background in 1st has an amazing level of detail. Scythe looks very top heavy though. Maybe some weight added to the bottom to counterbalance? 2nd picture shows an interesting choice of weapons -- will the fan be useful against a giant robot?
07-13-2004, 05:41 PM
These are great, very clean line work....and yes I do think the blade on the first one is way way too big, especialy considering the toothpick its connected to. I realise this is the style but the trouble is, it throws the perspective and comp way out. She looks pretty agile so could get away with a small but leathal weapon. The picture would still look just as interesting... just a thought. Apart from that, I love your work!
01-18-2006, 06:00 PM
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