View Full Version : Character : Sexy Girl
07-09-2004, 08:35 PM
Sorry, I couldnt find a better title for this.
I was working on it over at the WIP section, got only a few responses (but good ones) so I think im finished now. Watcha think?
07-09-2004, 08:53 PM
Uh well I could think of some other titles but we'll skip that ;-)
The two main problems are the foreshortening on the hands and her breasts appear lumpy and uneven. The hands really need the most work.. Besides being claw like mirrors or one another the painting of them stands out from the rest of the body.
07-10-2004, 01:15 AM
Yup, I second that. The hands are scary - look sort of old-lady like. And the way you've shaded the breasts makes them look flattened in front, and sort of shapeless. Her forearms also look like they're different lengths. Also, is it just me, or does her blank stare creep anyone else out?
07-10-2004, 01:36 AM
Her forearms look like they're different lengths because one elbow is further back than the other. Il work on her chest.
01-18-2006, 05:00 PM
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