xmen3d
07-26-2002, 08:57 PM
made in 3dmax
give me some advise
give me some advise
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pascal_blanche
07-26-2002, 08:59 PM
Advises? really??? you don't need advises! :applause:
Matt
07-26-2002, 09:13 PM
Well, the lighting and texture need just a little bit of work. Her skin doesn't look realistic, although it could if you worked with some specular maps, and possibly a light bump map. Also, the diffuse texture needs to be more random in color, because she looks like she's just a solid color. More shadows are needed too, even in this highly lit scene. Pretty good model though.
the_real_cabal
07-26-2002, 09:58 PM
superb design :thumbsup: would be great if one could see the rest :D ... and for the skin - i find it good enough because the character is not placed in reality ...
Ryan-B
07-26-2002, 10:15 PM
Very nice! I like the fluid look of her hair.
Two small nitpicks:
1) The hair on the side of her head is a bit thin. You shouldn't be able to see her scalp.
2) Her ear has some hard edges on the inside. A bit of smoothing and it will be great.
Well done.
Two small nitpicks:
1) The hair on the side of her head is a bit thin. You shouldn't be able to see her scalp.
2) Her ear has some hard edges on the inside. A bit of smoothing and it will be great.
Well done.
kyphur
07-27-2002, 12:45 AM
Yeah, it looks too thin and it also looks as if it's passing through the surface of her back and neck. Is that the case or is it just too short?
Kyph
Kyph
HapZungLam
07-27-2002, 01:50 AM
i found her hot. why's that???
S E D A H
07-27-2002, 03:57 AM
really nice great work one thing maybe the top of the ears needs work but expt that this is perfect.and l like the style of the air
Grey
07-27-2002, 04:54 AM
I think the hair behind the ear needs to be a bit closer to it (from the growth point)...
she's lovely.
she's lovely.
Adam
07-27-2002, 03:29 PM
hey that looks great:thumbsup:
the only thing that I would say is fix the ear and maybe soften up the jaw line as it approaches the ear. I think women tend to have smoother jaw lines. I love the hair and I think the textures look great. Also the light scattering on the cheek is a nice touch
the only thing that I would say is fix the ear and maybe soften up the jaw line as it approaches the ear. I think women tend to have smoother jaw lines. I love the hair and I think the textures look great. Also the light scattering on the cheek is a nice touch
Toeng.com
07-27-2002, 11:43 PM
Very good indeed :) ...
you are the master :) ... the hair looks very nice.
kudos ..:airguitar
you are the master :) ... the hair looks very nice.
kudos ..:airguitar
alex_m1s1n_user
07-28-2002, 01:11 AM
its beautiful :applause:
alex_m1s1n_user
07-28-2002, 01:17 AM
did u use shag hair?, looks so good
show
07-28-2002, 01:23 AM
very very nice indeed.
my only crits would be that the hair is a little too thin and should perhaps start closer around the ear.
also her cheek seems a bit flat i would look into bring that out a bit and making the jaw line a little les defined.
its very very nice :)
my only crits would be that the hair is a little too thin and should perhaps start closer around the ear.
also her cheek seems a bit flat i would look into bring that out a bit and making the jaw line a little les defined.
its very very nice :)
wedge2002
07-28-2002, 02:21 AM
Hey I think that the final model is pretty good. I don't know much though. Where are you from and where did you get the ideas for your subject? She looks like someone that I knew before. Good work though. Peace.
xynaria
07-28-2002, 03:42 AM
Though I agree with the crits about the ear,jaw and hair, I still think this is pretty impressive.. any chance of some other views????
What I don'y understand though is that after well over 800 views and 15 replies.. this has no stars XX!!!?????XX!!!
:beer:
What I don'y understand though is that after well over 800 views and 15 replies.. this has no stars XX!!!?????XX!!!
:beer:
lyppeter
07-28-2002, 07:35 AM
难道你就这样把FLINTSOFT丢了吗？我已綺一个多月没进去了！！太不负责了！太不负责了！太不负责了！太不负责了！太不负责了！太不负责了！:mad: :mad: :mad: :mad: :
Marcel
07-28-2002, 09:44 AM
The face strikes me as being a bit too long, and according to my figure drawing book, the ear should be placed a bit hight too (between the bottom of the nostrils and the bottom of the eyebrows).
Great work, I really love the hair thing!
(I wonder what Lyppeter is so mad about!)
Great work, I really love the hair thing!
(I wonder what Lyppeter is so mad about!)
zeegate
07-28-2002, 10:37 AM
beautiful pic :bounce: :bounce:
My only crit is that the ear and jawline reaches too far back. Not much just a tiney bit :cool:
-Zee
My only crit is that the ear and jawline reaches too far back. Not much just a tiney bit :cool:
-Zee
psil
07-28-2002, 11:22 AM
brilliant:applause:
Joril
07-28-2002, 11:40 AM
Marcel has a point.
I also think the jaw runs back far to much and the ear is to far back on the head.
I also think the jaw runs back far to much and the ear is to far back on the head.
anobrin
07-28-2002, 01:19 PM
Could you post a frontal face shot please???
Jacko Cohen
07-28-2002, 02:30 PM
OMG :eek:
I think the first comment said it the best. everything else is pure nitpicking. Well... maybe the hair :shrug: .
anyway, beautiful work.
I'll spend the rest of my allotted smilies to bounce around:
:bounce: :bounce: :bounce: (you deserve 5)
I think the first comment said it the best. everything else is pure nitpicking. Well... maybe the hair :shrug: .
anyway, beautiful work.
I'll spend the rest of my allotted smilies to bounce around:
:bounce: :bounce: :bounce: (you deserve 5)
xmen3d
07-28-2002, 03:55 PM
my english isn't good
i know the hair is thin,but i do nothing because software
if i add the number of the hair, in th rendering appear error
"out of memory" ,later 3d max auto close.
i don't solve
in the model ,around ears is tough,
maybe meshsmooth ought to add:)
about jawline and ears's position have little promblem
(ears are between the bottom of the nostrils and the bottom of the eyebrows,i dont't think so,because i notice everyone has some different)
thank for all of you advices
i know the hair is thin,but i do nothing because software
if i add the number of the hair, in th rendering appear error
"out of memory" ,later 3d max auto close.
i don't solve
in the model ,around ears is tough,
maybe meshsmooth ought to add:)
about jawline and ears's position have little promblem
(ears are between the bottom of the nostrils and the bottom of the eyebrows,i dont't think so,because i notice everyone has some different)
thank for all of you advices
Bruzundanga
07-28-2002, 04:52 PM
Great use of Boris Valejo ilustration as a tatoo for her....
Nice work
:thumbsup:
Nice work
:thumbsup:
SILMAETH
07-28-2002, 06:57 PM
great pose and modelling:thumbsup:
May I suggest you a technique I use for the hairs so you won't have those memory problems:
I both use spline and patches. the patches are use for the wide locks I assign an opacity map made of real hair lock I shot with a camera thus I get a good random aspect for those locks.
and I use splines like you in order to have less uniformity in the "haircut"
you can check an example of what u can obtain here:
http://khaos3d.3dvf.net/version_eng/Moria_orc2.htm
althought its not finished I like the result
And soon I'll put a tutorial of this on my website
May I suggest you a technique I use for the hairs so you won't have those memory problems:
I both use spline and patches. the patches are use for the wide locks I assign an opacity map made of real hair lock I shot with a camera thus I get a good random aspect for those locks.
and I use splines like you in order to have less uniformity in the "haircut"
you can check an example of what u can obtain here:
http://khaos3d.3dvf.net/version_eng/Moria_orc2.htm
althought its not finished I like the result
And soon I'll put a tutorial of this on my website
Elliotjnewman
07-28-2002, 08:54 PM
Originally posted by Marcel
The face strikes me as being a bit too long, and according to my figure drawing book, the ear should be placed a bit hight too (between the bottom of the nostrils and the bottom of the eyebrows).
Great work, I really love the hair thing!
(I wonder what Lyppeter is so mad about!)
I think its hard to say this. If the head was slightly tilted downwards or upwards then those horizontal lines would meet the ear in a different place.
great work. :)
The face strikes me as being a bit too long, and according to my figure drawing book, the ear should be placed a bit hight too (between the bottom of the nostrils and the bottom of the eyebrows).
Great work, I really love the hair thing!
(I wonder what Lyppeter is so mad about!)
I think its hard to say this. If the head was slightly tilted downwards or upwards then those horizontal lines would meet the ear in a different place.
great work. :)
urgaffel
07-28-2002, 09:01 PM
The face looks horizontal to me. If you look at the jawline, the forehead and the way the ear isn't tilted, I'd say it has to be moved up.
xmen3d
07-30-2002, 06:29 AM
according to my figure drawing book, the ear should be placed a bit hight too (between the bottom of the nostrils and the bottom of the eyebrows).
i think figure drawing book said is commen(average ),every one
has different
the 3d model i make refer to true person
i think figure drawing book said is commen(average ),every one
has different
the 3d model i make refer to true person
ghZaaaRK
07-30-2002, 10:33 AM
my only crits is about Marcel :)
are you insane?
you must be a big psycho hehe
This pix is Great, and your detail doesn't have any interest Marcelus:
-oh, the face is a bit too long, she looks like an appel
-oh no, the fifth hair isn't realist, is physicly impossible, you should make shorter. :)
please, calme down arf
Great PICTURE! bye
are you insane?
you must be a big psycho hehe
This pix is Great, and your detail doesn't have any interest Marcelus:
-oh, the face is a bit too long, she looks like an appel
-oh no, the fifth hair isn't realist, is physicly impossible, you should make shorter. :)
please, calme down arf
Great PICTURE! bye
Marcel
07-30-2002, 10:56 AM
my only crits is about Marcel
are you insane?
you must be a big psycho hehe
Maybe you should ask the moderators to build in a post reply button that automaticly posts a message with 'man that is awesome work!'. Wouldn't that be easy? Replying with a single click! Hell!, you could reply to all threads in just five minutes!
I bet everyones artwork would improve so much by that!
Let me quote from another thread (The lost art of critisism, in the general section) I think it sums up the problem quite well:
If someone posts an image on CG Talk, the usual reason is to get objective feedback.
The cases Sherban talks about is not uncommon. Everyone gives positive remarks and when someone actually posts an objective opinion, he/she gets flamed.
We (the mods) just have to keep a closer eye on things and keep the discussions as objective and friendly as possible.
L.
This pix is Great, and your detail doesn't have any interest Marcelus:
-oh, the face is a bit too long, she looks like an appel
I'm just pointing out things that I think could be improved, so it'll be an even better picture.
I was not the only one who thought that the face is too long, and the ear too low. Maybe his reference material has such an anatomy, but if it looks weird (to most people) then maybe he should change it to make it more pleasing to the eye.
-oh no, the fifth hair isn't realist, is physicly impossible, you should make shorter.
Are you blind? I never said the hair was wrong...in fact, I said I really like it.
I am not here to bash his work, I am giving feedback to improve it (in my opinion). Objective feedback is the most valuable thing to improve your skills.
If you do not like a board where people discuss eachothers work in a objective way I think you should go somewhere else.
Big compliments for Xmen3d, your work is very close to the original reference!
are you insane?
you must be a big psycho hehe
Maybe you should ask the moderators to build in a post reply button that automaticly posts a message with 'man that is awesome work!'. Wouldn't that be easy? Replying with a single click! Hell!, you could reply to all threads in just five minutes!
I bet everyones artwork would improve so much by that!
Let me quote from another thread (The lost art of critisism, in the general section) I think it sums up the problem quite well:
If someone posts an image on CG Talk, the usual reason is to get objective feedback.
The cases Sherban talks about is not uncommon. Everyone gives positive remarks and when someone actually posts an objective opinion, he/she gets flamed.
We (the mods) just have to keep a closer eye on things and keep the discussions as objective and friendly as possible.
L.
This pix is Great, and your detail doesn't have any interest Marcelus:
-oh, the face is a bit too long, she looks like an appel
I'm just pointing out things that I think could be improved, so it'll be an even better picture.
I was not the only one who thought that the face is too long, and the ear too low. Maybe his reference material has such an anatomy, but if it looks weird (to most people) then maybe he should change it to make it more pleasing to the eye.
-oh no, the fifth hair isn't realist, is physicly impossible, you should make shorter.
Are you blind? I never said the hair was wrong...in fact, I said I really like it.
I am not here to bash his work, I am giving feedback to improve it (in my opinion). Objective feedback is the most valuable thing to improve your skills.
If you do not like a board where people discuss eachothers work in a objective way I think you should go somewhere else.
Big compliments for Xmen3d, your work is very close to the original reference!
sherban
07-30-2002, 11:35 AM
About the thin hair:
I might be stating the obvious here but I think all you need to do is color her scalp the same color as her hair - giving the impression of full rich hair at no additional rendering costs :)
ps. Very beautiful model. no crits on my part. :thumbsup:
I might be stating the obvious here but I think all you need to do is color her scalp the same color as her hair - giving the impression of full rich hair at no additional rendering costs :)
ps. Very beautiful model. no crits on my part. :thumbsup:
zeegate
07-30-2002, 12:20 PM
hey people . . get of Marcel's back. I really don't think he was out of line.
Isn't critique the point of this forum ? We post stuff to hear what people say so we can improve our skills. That's how it should be I think. Great skills and models can always be improved :)
-Zee
Isn't critique the point of this forum ? We post stuff to hear what people say so we can improve our skills. That's how it should be I think. Great skills and models can always be improved :)
-Zee
Neil
07-30-2002, 01:30 PM
I just made the scalp darker in PS.
If you are gonna make an animation of it though, i would go with what SHERBAN said and just make a darker scalp.
If you are gonna make an animation of it though, i would go with what SHERBAN said and just make a darker scalp.
xmen3d
07-30-2002, 02:02 PM
sorry i don‘t want to let someone angry,sorry!!
i want to say we ought to observe , don,t whole belive book,take them to reference
Marcel :i agree"
if it looks weird (to most people) then maybe he should change it to make it more pleasing to the eye."
:)
i remember
i want to say we ought to observe , don,t whole belive book,take them to reference
Marcel :i agree"
if it looks weird (to most people) then maybe he should change it to make it more pleasing to the eye."
:)
i remember
xmen3d
07-30-2002, 02:03 PM
i don,t make animation
the hair hard to control for me:)
the hair hard to control for me:)
ghZaaaRK
07-30-2002, 02:50 PM
ok sorry, i find my post a little bit too aggressive :) (not really)
in fact, it makes me laugh to see people who critics a so little detail.
I can survive on this board Marcelus hehe thx
you'are (all) too serious! breath, go out....
i find no default in this pix, it's a head, and a head is not always symetric or doesn't respect anytime the strict rules of anatomy.
thus, it's cool to give a feedback, but an interesting feedback.!
it's true, Watch a moment please the reference book (xmen's post), it's strange, not? the girl's head doesn't respect the rules, her ear is too lower although she's real, no?
you understood i......
Xmen, maybe i don't have a good sight, but for me the girl sounds good even if her ear might be higher following others suggestions.
oh, one last thing:
oh no, the fifth hair isn't realist, is physicly impossible, you should make shorter.
Are you blind? i never said the hair was wrong...in fact i said i really like it
i was kidding on it! you are too serious, it's second degree! hehe
bye all
in fact, it makes me laugh to see people who critics a so little detail.
I can survive on this board Marcelus hehe thx
you'are (all) too serious! breath, go out....
i find no default in this pix, it's a head, and a head is not always symetric or doesn't respect anytime the strict rules of anatomy.
thus, it's cool to give a feedback, but an interesting feedback.!
it's true, Watch a moment please the reference book (xmen's post), it's strange, not? the girl's head doesn't respect the rules, her ear is too lower although she's real, no?
you understood i......
Xmen, maybe i don't have a good sight, but for me the girl sounds good even if her ear might be higher following others suggestions.
oh, one last thing:
oh no, the fifth hair isn't realist, is physicly impossible, you should make shorter.
Are you blind? i never said the hair was wrong...in fact i said i really like it
i was kidding on it! you are too serious, it's second degree! hehe
bye all
Marcel
07-30-2002, 03:37 PM
ok sorry, i find my post a little bit too aggressive (not really)
I'm not scared to say your post was absolutely useless. It didn't contain a single thing to improve the artwork presented. Instead of saying something constructive, you've only flamed somebody who tried to add something to the discussion.
in fact, it makes me laugh to see people who critics a so little detail.
It might be a small detail to you, but it was the first thing I saw when I took a closer look at the image. When I posted it, more people agreed that it looked a bit strange. So in your eyes it might be a small detail, but for other people (perhaps with a more trained eye) it wasn't.
If the rest of the head was poorly modelled, I would agree that my critics are nitpicky, but not with a good model like this.
Besides, even if it is a small detail, spending time on the details is very important, the details are what make your art look good and realistic.
i find no default in this pix, it's a head, and a head is not always symetric or doesn't respect anytime the strict rules of anatomy.
thus, it's cool to give a feedback, but an interesting feedback.!
it's true, Watch a moment please the reference book (xmen's post), it's strange, not? the girl's head doesn't respect the rules, her ear is too lower although she's real, no?
I can show you pictures of people having 3 fingers. Yet when I model a photorealistic figure whose hand has only three fingers people are gonna comment on that.
My point is, we don't know that the model is supposed to have a ear that is too low, we jugde it by the standard human anatomy.
It might as well be an incorrect model as far as we know, and in that case we should comment on it to improve it.
So next time ghZaaaRK, don't be such an ass, and respect people who give honest comments, even if you think that he comments that are given are trivial.
I'm not scared to say your post was absolutely useless. It didn't contain a single thing to improve the artwork presented. Instead of saying something constructive, you've only flamed somebody who tried to add something to the discussion.
in fact, it makes me laugh to see people who critics a so little detail.
It might be a small detail to you, but it was the first thing I saw when I took a closer look at the image. When I posted it, more people agreed that it looked a bit strange. So in your eyes it might be a small detail, but for other people (perhaps with a more trained eye) it wasn't.
If the rest of the head was poorly modelled, I would agree that my critics are nitpicky, but not with a good model like this.
Besides, even if it is a small detail, spending time on the details is very important, the details are what make your art look good and realistic.
i find no default in this pix, it's a head, and a head is not always symetric or doesn't respect anytime the strict rules of anatomy.
thus, it's cool to give a feedback, but an interesting feedback.!
it's true, Watch a moment please the reference book (xmen's post), it's strange, not? the girl's head doesn't respect the rules, her ear is too lower although she's real, no?
I can show you pictures of people having 3 fingers. Yet when I model a photorealistic figure whose hand has only three fingers people are gonna comment on that.
My point is, we don't know that the model is supposed to have a ear that is too low, we jugde it by the standard human anatomy.
It might as well be an incorrect model as far as we know, and in that case we should comment on it to improve it.
So next time ghZaaaRK, don't be such an ass, and respect people who give honest comments, even if you think that he comments that are given are trivial.
xmen3d
07-30-2002, 04:30 PM
in fact
i don't want to do this picture, i do this by accident
sorry my english isn't good
in first i do this model ,i want to exercise model head(i think if i model stand head,don,t train model better.so i make this model like ture person,such as draw person take true person as model )
ok
my next work is make other person
"bruce lee" GongFu SUPERSTAR
this is his photo
discuss is good thing, it improve me:)
i don't want to do this picture, i do this by accident
sorry my english isn't good
in first i do this model ,i want to exercise model head(i think if i model stand head,don,t train model better.so i make this model like ture person,such as draw person take true person as model )
ok
my next work is make other person
"bruce lee" GongFu SUPERSTAR
this is his photo
discuss is good thing, it improve me:)
xmen3d
07-30-2002, 04:31 PM
I DON,T FINISH HIM
Marcel
07-30-2002, 05:12 PM
I understand what you mean Xmen3d, you want to model to be as close to the reality as you can make it. You are right, it is a very good exercise to do that. (And it is very hard!)
Your Bruce Lee model is amazing, you can already recognize him! Could you show us a wireframe? I would really like to see that.
I know that it is a work in progress, but I hope you don't mind if I make a few comments :)
The upper lip seems a bit too large.
The chin is a bit too large and wide.
The nose is should be more pointy.
These things make him look like he is not asian.
I have attached two pictures from my figure drawing book about eyes, they might come in handy...
http://members.rott.chello.nl/mvijfwinkel/eye.jpg
http://members.rott.chello.nl/mvijfwinkel/eye2.jpg
Good luck!
By the way, I have send you a private message.
Your Bruce Lee model is amazing, you can already recognize him! Could you show us a wireframe? I would really like to see that.
I know that it is a work in progress, but I hope you don't mind if I make a few comments :)
The upper lip seems a bit too large.
The chin is a bit too large and wide.
The nose is should be more pointy.
These things make him look like he is not asian.
I have attached two pictures from my figure drawing book about eyes, they might come in handy...
http://members.rott.chello.nl/mvijfwinkel/eye.jpg
http://members.rott.chello.nl/mvijfwinkel/eye2.jpg
Good luck!
By the way, I have send you a private message.
Marcel
07-30-2002, 05:24 PM
Do you know this animation? It dates from a few years back.
It's a 3d animated Bruce Lee, punching and with lip-sync.
It's a big download (13Mb) but it might be fun to look at. (The face isn't very detailed, but the expressions are very good)
http://www.cs.dartmouth.edu/~brd/Teaching/Animation/Video/bruce_lee.mpg
It's a 3d animated Bruce Lee, punching and with lip-sync.
It's a big download (13Mb) but it might be fun to look at. (The face isn't very detailed, but the expressions are very good)
http://www.cs.dartmouth.edu/~brd/Teaching/Animation/Video/bruce_lee.mpg
ghZaaaRK
07-30-2002, 05:26 PM
wow marcel calm down!
incredible, are you sad ?don't cry babe :p
i respect people here okay, it's you who don't know to make difference between joke and reality maybe even reality and fiction arf!
so please don't play like that....
i respect anyone here, it's just a crits like you.
perhaps my eyes are not so trained and what?
you make a lot of shit for nothing.
can show you pictures of people having 3 fingers. Yet when I model a photorealistic figure whose hand has only three fingers people are gonna comment on that.
My point is, we don't know that the model is supposed to have a ear that is too low, we jugde it by the standard human anatomy.
even a beautiful girl could have a strange ear!
forget standard man, it'sn't a photorealistic pix and even it was one.
i'm really astonished, spread your ass guy, you're too serious!! i respected you but i don't respect anyone who "play" such a martyr!
Xmen, good begining for Bruce Lee.. be aware for his ear.
BYE
ps: read between lines, a smiley=laugh
incredible, are you sad ?don't cry babe :p
i respect people here okay, it's you who don't know to make difference between joke and reality maybe even reality and fiction arf!
so please don't play like that....
i respect anyone here, it's just a crits like you.
perhaps my eyes are not so trained and what?
you make a lot of shit for nothing.
can show you pictures of people having 3 fingers. Yet when I model a photorealistic figure whose hand has only three fingers people are gonna comment on that.
My point is, we don't know that the model is supposed to have a ear that is too low, we jugde it by the standard human anatomy.
even a beautiful girl could have a strange ear!
forget standard man, it'sn't a photorealistic pix and even it was one.
i'm really astonished, spread your ass guy, you're too serious!! i respected you but i don't respect anyone who "play" such a martyr!
Xmen, good begining for Bruce Lee.. be aware for his ear.
BYE
ps: read between lines, a smiley=laugh
Marcel
07-30-2002, 05:47 PM
even a beautiful girl could have a strange ear!
forget standard man, it'sn't a photorealistic pix and even it was one.
You still don't get it:
How do we know if it is supposed to be a beautiful girl with a strange ear, or if it just a flaw in the model that the maker overlooked?
If I'd see a render like that, I'd guess it would be the last option, because most of us are trying to model beautiful girls.
Calling me insane and a big psycho because I have comments on somebodies work is not really respectfull, is it. Not that I really care about how you think about me. It's just that people like you ruin the open atmosphere on this board.
It should be a place where we can discuss work openly, not a place where we are only allowed to post positive comments or be flamed otherwise.
Now let's not pollute this thread any longer. It's already clear to me that you do not and never will see my point.
forget standard man, it'sn't a photorealistic pix and even it was one.
You still don't get it:
How do we know if it is supposed to be a beautiful girl with a strange ear, or if it just a flaw in the model that the maker overlooked?
If I'd see a render like that, I'd guess it would be the last option, because most of us are trying to model beautiful girls.
Calling me insane and a big psycho because I have comments on somebodies work is not really respectfull, is it. Not that I really care about how you think about me. It's just that people like you ruin the open atmosphere on this board.
It should be a place where we can discuss work openly, not a place where we are only allowed to post positive comments or be flamed otherwise.
Now let's not pollute this thread any longer. It's already clear to me that you do not and never will see my point.
xmen3d
07-30-2002, 05:55 PM
THANK FOR Marcel :)
THAnk for YOUR ADVISE,sometimes i don,t see my mistake myself,because i see long time:)
I SEE THAT MOVIE
I DON'T HAVE confidence TO DO ANIMATION BETTER THAN THAT
BUT I HAVE confidence TO MODEL BETTER THAN THAT:)
THAnk for YOUR ADVISE,sometimes i don,t see my mistake myself,because i see long time:)
I SEE THAT MOVIE
I DON'T HAVE confidence TO DO ANIMATION BETTER THAN THAT
BUT I HAVE confidence TO MODEL BETTER THAN THAT:)
ivanimal
07-31-2002, 10:38 AM
Funtastic work.:buttrock: :thumbsup:
Aearon
08-05-2002, 12:33 AM
on that bruce lee model
first of all you should probably start a new thread for it according to the new rules (in wip forum, better to do it now and just place a link here)
now on to the c&c :)
it looks very good so far, has nice feel of mass and definition to it, the whole facial structur looks very close, but i think the proportions are still a bit off (i guess i'm telling you something you already know, as you're not done with it)
well marcel kinda pointed out everything i also noticed on a closer look, and you already improved it by a great deal
another thing i noticed though: your model somehow looks more attractive than the 'original', this is probably due to symmetry - so you should pay some special attention to breaking it in the end (the symmetry) by adding some irregularities
first of all you should probably start a new thread for it according to the new rules (in wip forum, better to do it now and just place a link here)
now on to the c&c :)
it looks very good so far, has nice feel of mass and definition to it, the whole facial structur looks very close, but i think the proportions are still a bit off (i guess i'm telling you something you already know, as you're not done with it)
well marcel kinda pointed out everything i also noticed on a closer look, and you already improved it by a great deal
another thing i noticed though: your model somehow looks more attractive than the 'original', this is probably due to symmetry - so you should pay some special attention to breaking it in the end (the symmetry) by adding some irregularities
The Magic Pen
08-05-2002, 02:11 AM
You rock man :buttrock:
Joel Hooks
08-05-2002, 03:03 AM
Sweet. That Bruce Lee is looking nice. A full Lee model would be hella fun to animate.
Russo
08-05-2002, 01:24 PM
great work :thumbsup:
You can post a front view of reference photo? thanks:wavey:
You can post a front view of reference photo? thanks:wavey:
xmen3d
08-07-2002, 02:49 AM
THANK ALL
RUSSO:HERE IS FRONT PHOTO
I GET THIS PIC FROME VCD
RUSSO:HERE IS FRONT PHOTO
I GET THIS PIC FROME VCD
Poju
08-07-2002, 03:35 AM
Wery nice looks Bruce already, but something reminds me of Laurence Fishburne:surprised
http://www.spawn.com.br/matrix/images/atores_fishburn2.jpg
I think it's mouth
Anyway creat job
http://www.spawn.com.br/matrix/images/atores_fishburn2.jpg
I think it's mouth
Anyway creat job
facial
08-07-2002, 04:04 AM
:thumbsup: Your works is realy nice, Your wireform image looks so professional for facial expression, Did you think keep to do some lipsync for those model?
Great job:buttrock: Keep post.
Great job:buttrock: Keep post.
xmen3d
08-07-2002, 05:10 AM
facial:
I think if you model reference muscle structure ,you will make facial animation:)
I think if you model reference muscle structure ,you will make facial animation:)
facial
08-07-2002, 05:19 AM
Originally posted by xmen3d
facial:
I think if you model reference muscle structure ,you will make facial animation:)
Yes, I will, if you have something want to facial animate, Maybe i can help?i have good way and fast way to do:) :p
I am researching facial expression and lip sync and work on a film from Moebius's style.
Cheers:beer:
facial:
I think if you model reference muscle structure ,you will make facial animation:)
Yes, I will, if you have something want to facial animate, Maybe i can help?i have good way and fast way to do:) :p
I am researching facial expression and lip sync and work on a film from Moebius's style.
Cheers:beer:
facial
08-07-2002, 05:37 AM
Originally posted by xmen3d
facial:
I think if you model reference muscle structure ,you will make facial animation:)
我刚看了你的网叶, 你做的很好, 我也才知道你也来自中国, 很高兴在这里见到你, 我也正在想你做了这么好的模型, 如果能让他们动起来, 有说话那就更好了, 只是一个建议, 还望指教.
我最近在研究用CG实现中国水墨籣的效果, 有一些好的结果, 如果你有兴趣的话,
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=4944
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=13876
对了, 我在打开你的网叶时, 我的病毒监测说有一个病毒.:)
Ron 许
facial:
I think if you model reference muscle structure ,you will make facial animation:)
我刚看了你的网叶, 你做的很好, 我也才知道你也来自中国, 很高兴在这里见到你, 我也正在想你做了这么好的模型, 如果能让他们动起来, 有说话那就更好了, 只是一个建议, 还望指教.
我最近在研究用CG实现中国水墨籣的效果, 有一些好的结果, 如果你有兴趣的话,
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=4944
http://www.cgtalk.com/showthread.php?s=&threadid=13876
对了, 我在打开你的网叶时, 我的病毒监测说有一个病毒.:)
Ron 许
Russo
08-07-2002, 07:03 PM
haahha thanks man, but I want the female picture, sorry, can you post it?
thanks in advance :beer: :thumbsup:
thanks in advance :beer: :thumbsup:
DarkBane
08-09-2002, 02:49 AM
Awesome picture.
I agree maybe the lighting could be a little bet better, but damn, when it looks like that, it doesn't really matter.
My only comment would really have to be:
Correct me if I'm wrong, but that' a Boris Valejo tat, right?
I agree maybe the lighting could be a little bet better, but damn, when it looks like that, it doesn't really matter.
My only comment would really have to be:
Correct me if I'm wrong, but that' a Boris Valejo tat, right?
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