Riding Cop

[teknotek83]

nice work! cool characters and lighting! i think the only problem is that the characters are kind of blurry/out of focus. sharpen it up and you've got yourself a masterpiece!

[r3studios]

the hand on the left is wrong i think. its supposed to be his right hand but it looks like his left. he got two left hands :D

[Ilikesoup]

I really like this, and my crits are fairly minor. At first glance his right hand does look like a left, although the position is realistic if you try it yourself. Perhaps shifting the index finger so it's not so angular, and hitting the thumb with a little light would help. :shrug: IMO exaggerating the horse's ears makes him look more like a donkey. Also, if you could tone down the red of its lips to a more beige color they'd look more accurate and stand out less.

Otherwise this is a great picture. I love the composition, the light, the detail and the style. Did you start from a picture and add your own style or is this completely from your imagination?

[Mobra]

Hello Everyone!!

Thanks for the comments and critcs!! They all are really welcome!

I think the position of the right hand is a litle bit weird! I think it´s a reference fauls (My one´s!! hehehehe). I tried to fix it up! please take a look again!

http://www.mobra.hpg.ig.com.br/images/hand-reference.jpg

Ilike soup: Great point! The thumb position is really strange! The index finger is like this in reference! About the horse ears, its not really a royal horse or even a completely donkey.. maybe it a hibrid animal!! Maybe a kind of "Mule-horse"!! :). I have fixed up the lips coloring! Thank for you valluable opinio!!

Teknotek: I will anallyze the possibility of fixing up the bluring traouble!! By the way, thanks for your opinion!!


Thank you all!!

[The-13]

It's a great piece. I love the slightly comic look to it. The coloring and lighting is great. Awesome job. Althought the pinky on the right hand is a bit off I think...

[Downwrdspiral]

Great work. dont know why you dont have more replies.

[Q_B]

Hahahahah ... polícia andando de mula ...


Lol what a nice piece u have here! Characters are really great, overall colour is cool too, just definitely check out his right hand, the fingers are really scr*wed ...

And the "vote" grafitty on the wall could really use a bit more work too, i think.

But its great! Congrats!

[Mobra]

Hello everybody!!

So many replies!! Thanks you all!! All C&C are wellcome!!
After all comments, I realized that rigth hand was a litle bit weird!! Now I think I fixed it up! Take a look!

Q_B: Good poimt! I will work on it!

The_13: I think a fixed it!!

Bye everybody!http://www.mobra.hpg.ig.com.br/images/policialfinal02.jpg

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