Architecture - Exterior: Beachfront Residential Property

[sempiternal]

looks good. one thing that is wrong is shadows. these umbrella things on the beach have a shadow directly below them while the trees have shadows for about a 45 degrees angle of light.

in the middle section of the building are those bushes inside behind the glass? i don't think this is looking too good. sorry, can't explain why, just doesn't seem right. i like how there are people out on the balconies, that works well. although now i look at it more closely they seem to be a lot bigger in comparison to the people on the ground. i think you need to work on the scaling a little.

the reflections on the inside of the building make the image a little confusing and messy.

overall i think you have something pretty good i just think there are a few little things that could be fixed up to make it a little more professional.

hope i have been some help:)

[prophecy313]

Its good but i agree with sempiternal, the shadowing of the umbrellas isnt correct. They should be the same angle ans the trees and such.

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