Unknowing CRITIQUE

[lairer]

i feel blood in my conductors. :beer:
its very nice

[jeroentje]

Lower "unknowing" and put "of" left to "ART. It becomes more of a whole that way, if you understand my poor English in this one.

For the rest: it's absolutely gorgeous! I love it :thumbsup:
jeroentje

[Neil]

A few of these paintbrush strokes have boxes around them... i'm guessing you masked them or cut and pasted them. Well clean up the outline, so it doesn't look like a stamp, and looks more like a real brush stroke.

[lairer]

It's good with this squares, more interesting.

[dAKAPU]

O, thanx. Maybe I will repair it. And what u think about The Guards ?

[jeroentje]

Personally I thought the squares was a pretty good idea to keep a "connection" between the background and the squary typeface...

For the guards: I think the red ones is better.
The green one is about the same over the whole piece. Maybe variate some with brightness/contrast between the different heads and specially with the size of them.

:thumbsup:

[dAKAPU]

i saw your portfolio. i like things made by photoshop and illustrator. Are u using tablet ?

[jeroentje]

Hi dAKAPU,

Thanks a lot :beer:

I use a Wacom Graphire2 for the Photoshop and Painter stuff.
For Illustrator I still prefer a mouse, mainly for reasons of speed.

Good to see more graphic design here, btw :buttrock:

jeroentje

[falcou]

:thumbsup:

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