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stephan.s
07-01-2004, 02:27 AM
Hi
This is something I sketched while I waited for testrenderings to finish. I kinda like how it turned out and I want to take this a bit further. But I feel the picture lacks something. Something compositionally or colourwise. But I'm not sure. Hmm... I would even agree to add some more picure components in there. But I don't know what or where without destroying the composition... Maybe replacing something else? Does it need more colour variation? Hmm... your turn :D. Overpaints are more than welcome!

http://www.stephanart.com/kartoffelsalat.jpg

And teh sketch
http://www.stephanart.com/kartoffelsalatsketch.jpg

Thanks in advance :)

StephanD
07-01-2004, 03:54 AM
Beautiful,the character is very golgo13-ish :D

I think it's the colours,too repetitive try giving some lighter bg tones(greyish blue)

Good job,keep it up.

DannyDreams
07-01-2004, 05:04 PM
Try and give the ships in the background lights so they stand out a bit more and gives a feeling of depth. Also try and bring the aqua-ish lights from the soilders eyes a little more brightness and glow around the armor. One last thing as there seems to be lots of dead space. Try and play around with it by adding more dramatic images.

But nice artwork all together, very cool. :thumbsup:

iuri
07-01-2004, 06:24 PM
yep Like StephanD say!
The bg is some faded, and more than a bg more lighter try to use more living color, (is too red) itīs almost wierd to look =) but the draw is good I Like

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