Last Contract Project Animation

[mjdowswell]

Niice,

The motion blurs a bit odd on it, and the camera movement a bit stop and starty, but i understand about time limitations all to well...its very nicely modeled and textured and lit.

[InTheCity]

No motion blur, just a lot of compression for this post.

This was actually a rough cut too, the final loses all that stoping and farting and lands perfectly on the chair.

Thanks for the crit though. This was a couple of days trail and error, but about 8 hours solid work for the scene.

[basilisk]

not a criticism of the modelling, nice photorealism. Its just in real life I never saw a desk that tidy. Where are the pens, paper clips, coffee stains. Also the man must be a symmetry freak to organise the things on the desk in that nice arrangment - a bit of chaos and entropy and I think you might have a scene to fool a non expert viewer.

[flingster]

symmetry freak ...to funny.

that a pretty cool render inthecity...v impressed.

[acmepixel]

Very nicely done. The only thing that botherd me was the Powerbook looked a bit too thick. (Been coveting one for years now). It could just be the shadow.

[jerm]

Really nice! No one's mentioned the light yet, which i think was very natural. It felt like a real room too, didn't have much CG feel. On walkthrus, I always go with a longer lens to minimize the dizziness caused by distortion, but you also lose some of your frame as well. I liked the framing.

[InTheCity]

not a criticism of the modelling, nice photorealism. Its just in real life I never saw a desk that tidy. Where are the pens, paper clips, coffee stains. Also the man must be a symmetry freak to organise the things on the desk in that nice arrangment - a bit of chaos and entropy and I think you might have a scene to fool a non expert viewer.Had I have had my own way with the project, I would have made some more mess, but this project is for DVD and each object will zoomed in on for a case study, it was client preference to keep it clean...

Too the others....

Thanks for your crits guys, it was a big project, but it sure did pay well, got me some new toys to play with.

[Ric535]

really nice - i would like to see more of the scenes you worked on :)

[zsutton]

I really like it but i'd say the the phone is too reflevtive..just a small crit

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